Date: October 15 2016 9:47 PM Title: Love's Not Blind, but Often Bored
This is a very entertaining read, even if one is not a fan of vore. I'm not, but I thought the progression of transformation as he moved down the line of punishment, was a very natural, perfect flow, and cleverly written.
Thank you very much! It was an abstract exercise, just having fun with the idea and seeing how far it can go.
Date: June 25 2016 7:10 AM Title: Love's Not Blind, but Often Bored
I really love the transformation aspects of this story, how Brad’s incarnations become progressively worse. The idea of endless torment has always fascinated me, and this story captures that so well. If Brad had simply died, at least his suffering would have ended. But instead, he is forced to to suffer all sorts of humiliation, mostly because a goddess is bored. It’s chilling and amusing at the same time.
Aw, thanks so much! This is one of the more experiemental pieces that has freaked people out in the past. I always liked it because I thought it was a funny joke, but it strikes everyone differently. (I'm very glad you enjoyed it. And yeah, I've never felt death is a punishment. It's either a release from pain or it lets someone off the hook.)