Date: March 01 2018 2:21 PM Title: Queen of the Trailer Park
I feel odd about reviewing a work of yours that's so early, when I'm so familiar with and fond of your present work. I'm only going to say good things about the story here, and yell at 1998 you in private. :)
I'm as fond as anyone of a good assplay story, and despite any other considerations I consider this an assplay story. I thought the prismatic mirror as a shrinking device was different, and I like the idea of shrinking strangers, so that I also enjoyed.
Sensory input was wonderful. It seems you've always been great at describing textures and environment, smells and sensations.
I also liked her power dialogue near the end. This is never going to be my favorite story by you, but I found things to enjoy from beginning to end.
Yeah, 1998 was a different time. I own the difference between what I write now and who I was 20 years ago.
It's very big of you to focus on the positive here. I'm sorry the cute little guy died, I know that's not what you would have wanted. And it's definitely an assplay story, because that's all men want from Ginny. I find it important in storytelling to step back and pay attention to all five senses, then include the ones that add to the moment. That's my technique.
Date: June 26 2016 8:52 PM Title: Queen of the Trailer Park
Loved this story! Read it a year or two ago meant to save but I couldn't find it again.
I'm glad you liked it! It's been in my own files for too long, thought I might as well put it back up.
Date: June 26 2016 3:55 PM Title: Queen of the Trailer Park
This is pretty good. Wish it didn't end so abpruptly, but alright Still ten out of ten for booty!
Thank you very much! I agree with you, this is one I'd like to rewrite and expand a lot more. I think I just knocked it out in a sitting, but it's an idea that deserves some elaboration.
Date: June 26 2016 5:40 AM Title: Queen of the Trailer Park
The copy on my harddrive is from 2005, but still - wow! I didn't have an account back then, so finally, after so many years, I can say "thank you" :)
You're very welcome! I'm gratified you enjoyed it so much. Thank you very much for speaking up!