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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2016 11:44 PM Title: TJ, Carissa, and Tom

Interesting chapter. Indeed LJin and TomSpeedy. But there is more going on here.



Author's Response:

Hmm...subterfuge? Me? ;)

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2016 9:49 PM Title: TJ, Carissa, and Tom

Wonder if Tom still would say 'heaven' again, knowing this beforehand.



Author's Response:

One person's heaven... eye opening to say the least for our little friend 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2016 6:19 PM Title: TJ, Carissa, and Tom

To be fair, this is a very accurate description of what would happen if I was in this position.

I would dream of Tom's adventure inside Carrisa but as soon as I actually am inside, I would panic. I would fear for myself becuase of the loss of direction, everything is set and I can't hold anything.

However, I keep telling myself that it's just like a roller coaster ride. Once you are in, you just got with it and let the ride take you all the way to orgasm and the ride is over.

I'm glad it's not over. Part 2 with TJ is coming up. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

The ldealized notion as opposed to the practical reality. Either go with it or get swallowed up by it, wait in this case that could be the same thing 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2016 5:18 PM Title: TJ, Carissa, and Tom

In a strange way, this chapter reminds me of the old Hawaiian fable about how Death first came into the world.

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