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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 4:29 PM Title: In the Nick of Time

Clarissa and Hester could trade pussy pals.

And the three could get her recipe (once Hester figures it out), and then they could team up. Or fight over shrunken men.

Also, that still leave a question open: what was Asha doing scrabbling around the floor, if they can't shrink people themselves?



Author's Response:

For every question answered, another posed. All in good time... :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 9:37 AM Title: In the Nick of Time

Something tells me Tom has already been promoted to "prototype." Which would make Nick "sloppy seconds." Especially, if TJ and Carissa take him, despite his adamant refusal to volunteer!*

*And, I like the fact that he did. It's refreshing to see a shrunken male protagonist who's NOT an automatic horndog.

Author's Response:

There are onbe or two out there...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2016 6:32 PM Title: In the Nick of Time

Yo Duggernaut, Tj and Carrissa are experts at this teasing stuff. You need to have Miss Harwood do something like this. I would melt if she said that. However, I don't know much about these girls and its doesn't feel as sexy when they say it. Only Asha and her mom can make me tremble like Tom did.

These girls are super horny. I mean, they went straight for the pussy and now they will get even more excited that Asha has got Tom inside hers.

Basically, Nick is going to get fucked next chapter, literally. I wish most girls were into this stuff. They just straight up asked Nick if he wanted to be in their panties. I would have to pinch myself becuase that's how I would have directed this scene. It's a dream come true!

So Tj is after Scott. Asha has Tom. I guess Carrisa gets Nick? What about Asha's mom? You hinted at her being similar to Asha and I'm excited for when she shows up!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

What if Miss Harwood tranfered to this school? Whoa.

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