Date: August 19 2016 12:20 AM Title: Into the Light
@Carycomic. They are still way to accepting about this situation and TJ mentioned Scott immediately after hearing Nicks short sentence reason. Spoiled girls who get everything they want is the last thing he needs. But let see where this goes. Let's hope Nick's father didn't made a mistake with his new wife and stepdaughter.
The interaction between Hester and Scott seems more interesting for now. Hester can do creative experiments on him like a labrat.
[Report This]Date: August 18 2016 6:22 PM Title: Into the Light
Even if Nick was telling her the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth, I still don't think Asha would believe him. Unfortunately, he's only been telling her three-fourths of the truth, at most.
Which is still 25% of a lie.
[Report This]Date: August 18 2016 5:11 PM Title: Into the Light
Obviously we should have the girls question Tom when he wakes up. The girls might catch some different stories from Nick and Tom and might catch them lying.
Then of course, they can play. They can go about their daily business. You can describe how it's weird for Nick, but awesome for Tom.
Also, Calista still needs to show up. I'm waiting for her to find Tom, if that's what you had in mind.
Well, Asha wanted her friends to help seduce Nick. Well, it looks like that playtime is coming up.
If it's the weekdays, then the girls can take them to school and more fun can happen. (Teacher fun.)
You could also describe Nick's last in here. Perhaps this life changing experience will open him up and he will say something.
I know you are debating where to go from here, but hopefully you find some of these ideas useful.
Interesting to see Nick just reveal himself. I guess he had no choice. The girls would've found him anyway.
Yay! Tom is waking up. More fun!
I can't wait for the next chapter!