Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2016 8:43 PM Title: Strange Bedfellows

OK! So, my initial suspicion--that Asha, Carissa, and TJ were already veteran man-shrinkers--has been proven wrong. Which raises the question; were Asha and TJ just doing some kind of role-playing fantasy that first night Nick arrived at his step-relatives' home? That, in turn, raises another question; where did Scott the Snot get that orange goop if not from Asha?*

*Whom I first suspected of having developed it, for man-shrinking, in the first place.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2016 5:23 PM Title: Strange Bedfellows

Wow! This is amazing! Just like that, they are searching for Nick.

Glad Tom is alive and the injury just looked worse than it actually is. I'm also glad that they felt concerned for his well being. Funny that Asha just cared why was he on her bed.

As soon as they believe that Nick is there, they forget about Tom. Haha! These girls prefer Nick so much that they forgot that there is a little guy next to them.

Now, what will Nick do? Will he be courageous like always and reveal himself, or will he use strategy and watch what they do with Tom. If I were him, either way works. He either gets played with, or he gets to watch them play with Tom. (Maybe not since Tom is injured.)

Asha is quick to understand stuff. Maybe, she can conclude how Tom got into the bed and track down where Nick is by where Tom came from.

I can't wait for the next chapter!