[Report This]Date: August 11 2016 10:02 PM Title: Alone in the Dark
Ah! But, is Teeny Tom really unconscious? Or, is he positively, absolutely, undeniably, and reliably dead?*
*Sorry! This relatively new size category of "munchkin" made me think of THE WIZARD OF OZ. ;-)
Author's Response:
Time or me will tell...
Date: August 11 2016 9:05 PM Title: Alone in the Dark
Awwww. Didn't want him to die just yet :'(
Author's Response:
Still clinging to life, for now
[Report This]Date: August 11 2016 8:34 PM Title: Alone in the Dark
First off, I like how you didn't title to chapter so you couldn't spoil it.
Second. Wtf. I thought it was clear that choice B was the favorite but instead you combined the two choices and made Tom get crushed, but also live to use more fun.
I hope it's a small patch of blood. Otherwise, Tom is going to miss out on all the fun. Hopefully Hester shows up with some medication that helps Tom recover quickly.
What is it with Tom being injured in your stories? Lol. First Jessica drops him, and now this. I hope Tom can still hear and see all of this, especially Asha crouching over him. It would be quite the view.
If Tom wakes up to the sight of Asha, I bet he will feel better. His dream will come true and he will think that he is in heaven.
You did surprise me Duggernaut. Once, again. I couldn't predict this.
Hopefully Tom is ok.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Wouldn't want Tom to miss out, ;)