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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2016 3:53 PM Title: Test Subject - Scott Turcott

These last few chapters seem to have minimal progresss compared to the very first few chapters. When Nick moved in, went to school, got shrunk, it was appropriately fast and this part after the experiment seems to last a bit longer than I expected. Kinda anxious for playtime. (I'm always anxious for that.) lol.

Hester loves Nick. She wants to fuck him to show him her love. Here, Hester wants to fuck Scott to show how much she hates him. She wants to use her vsgina as a weapon where as if it were Nick, she would use it as a way of love.

I thought Hester was physically going to Nick's house 2 chapters ago. She was only checking his Facebook? If he shrunk, social media is not the best way to check that. Haha!

Scott knows where Asha lives, right? Isn't he jealous of Nick becuase he lives with Asha? I'm sure Hester will pry this info from Scott and there we go. Hester knows where Nick lives and then the whole party can unite and we don't have to have a back and forth between Nick and Scott chapters.

I think Hester will fuck Scott, but then she desires more. I think she will desire to go and get Nick after getting bored of Scott.

Next chapter Nick and Tom get first sight of the girls? What about some interaction too? Lol. We going step by step now? Let me guess, first they spot the girls. Next chapter, they go to the girls. Next one, they try to get their attention. After that chapter, they finall get their attention. Next chapter, we learn that last chapter actually was a dream. They are still trying to get their attention. Then after 5+ chapters, they make eye contact and decide to play with Nick and Tom. Yipee! (Haha! I'm joking. I hope the story picks up a bit though.)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2016 11:16 AM Title: Test Subject - Scott Turcott

I honestly can't recall ever reading a story that had a romantic pentagon. Scott will probably become the sex slave of Hester, who'd rather it be Nick. But, he's currently the person of carnal interest in the eyes of his stepsister, who's likewise being crushed on by Tom!

I know you'll try, just to spite me. But, I really don't think you can make this anymore--delightfully--complicated than you already have. :-)

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