Date: August 03 2016 2:46 PM Title: Learning How to Climb Stairs
Possibility: Hester finds Nick with Asha and company, and shrinks them.
However, we still have to explain Asha's earlier behaviour. If she can shrink people too, then we may have fight...
[Report This]Date: July 28 2016 7:15 AM Title: Learning How to Climb Stairs
Hmmmm! All this note-comparison, between Tom and Nick, is starting to make me suspect where Scott got that orange goop in the first place.
Author's Response:
An accident or an accident ;)?
Date: July 27 2016 9:07 PM Title: Learning How to Climb Stairs
The set up is clear. Poor Nick has only enemies. All these women don't have attractive personalities. The men are dumb like Scott or a potential tool for Asha and the gang(Tom).
This can be interesting, Nick versus this environment.
All the blame is shifted at Hester and it looks for 99% sure, but it could also be Asha and her mom responsible for the shrinking.
Author's Response:
Hey Barrowman the dynamic of this story is certainly different than either Anna or Michael without the heavy influence of suffering though a divorce and having your world uprooted can leave some deep emotional and psychological wounds. Scott was the initial foil Tom the sidekick. Mary truly cares and we don't know what Calista's disposition is yet. We shall see :)
[Report This]Date: July 27 2016 5:55 PM Title: Learning How to Climb Stairs
Felt a bit lacking compared to the rest of your chapters. Nothing too significant happened either.
The shoe scene was kinda cool. It's always great to see when a tiny realizes how smal they are.
The headphones as rope is a great idea. I don't know why I haven't seen that before. I read way too many giantess stories for that not to be a common idea.
Really Duggernaut?!! Lol! Tom staying a virgin even in college. Haha! You know what I think. Tom will get some random super hot girl, but she is the one in control and that's why she stays with Tom. Other guys are jealous of Tom, but since he worships this girl, this hottie is with him.
So this chapter was about climbing stairs. I felt like this chapter could be about the travel in general, including stairs, room, and maybe a hallway. The detail was great, I just think more progress could be made on that climb.
Nonetheless, I am excited for when the girls see them and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Kind of a context chapter trying to illustrate how even something that used to be simple can be so incredibly challenging. I like to be innovative with the environment like using the headphones as a scaling aid so I'm glad it seemed fresh for you.