Near the end, you said that TJ and Carrissa entered the house. First, isn't it Clarrissa? And second, isn't Clarrissa the mom, so I think you mixed someone up.

I remember just a few years ago, before I went to the gym, I was kinda weak to climb stuff. Also, my fingers couldn't really grip stuff. This Tom reminds me of my past. (Good times.)

Giantess Asha seems interesting. I would defiantly try getting her attention. She will be very intimidating while she focus's her big bright eyes on me.

Lol, Nick hasn't even got a clue that Asha is trying to seduce him. She brought her friends to help seduce him and Nick just can't put the pieces together.

I bet Tom is thinking "Nah, I wouldn't stand a chance. Nick might, but not me. I surrender ladies."

I'm guessing the 3rd person to arrive is Hester, and Scott is with her. So will Scott wake up and Hester takes him to Asha's house? I can see this whole event coming together.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Calista is the mom Carissa is the redhead. Hope that helps :)