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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 8:36 PM Title: Hester Primrose

I had to quickly re-check the mandatory descriptors on the title page to see what you meant by "...amidst his clothes." Because that phrase would be pretty ambiguous, by itself! Making me wonder whether or not his clothes had shrunken with Scott.*

*This time, poetry NOT intended. :-)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 6:18 PM Title: Hester Primrose

Alright! Let's get this show on the road! 1,2,3 guys down. So it look like instead of TJ being a giantess, it will be Hester becuase she has Scott now.

At first I thought she kept the chemical to throw at Scott in the locker room. I guess not, he was already shrinking.

I think Hester will realize that Tom and Nick had been infected and will arrive quickly at the house searching for them. Then Asha and Clarrissa see Hester on the ground searching and Hester let's them know what happened. They all exchange looks and then all search the ground for Nick and Tom.

That's my prediction.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 5:51 PM Title: Hester Primrose

So Hester, you've kept a sample and you're going to find out just what that stuff is. How's your entrepreneurial spirit? Can you capitalize on an invention?

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