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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2016 9:46 PM Title: Developing Chemistry and Biology

I'm with Nick. Unfortunately, b-----ds like Scott never fight fair. As soon as it looks like the challenger is starting to win, the loyal boot-lickers perform some kind of major cheat (similar to Abigail's soccer mirror).

Author's Response:

So true! We shall how it all works out in hte end...muwahaha

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2016 4:56 PM Title: Developing Chemistry and Biology

Yeahheahh! The trio of guys have been found! I think Hester is another girl going to be a main character was well.

Tom Clady. Hmm. Reminds me of Tom Brady since it rhymes too. Tall and lanky. Interesting. Personally, I don't care much for the appearance of any of the guys, haha!

I'm trying to picture how all these students will get together. Perhaps, Nick challenges Scott to a fight. Nick wins. Nick and Asha go home with Tom, TJ and Hester cheering him. Scott then shows up at Asha and Nick's house and demands a rematch. They file out on the street with everyone watching. Scott pulls out a test tube with stuff in it. Everyone but Nick knows what it is and Tom jumps on Scott to prevent him from throwing it at Nick. Nick, then jumps in the fight and soon the tube breaks, its contents spilling out and the 3 boys inhale the gas. The girls gasp and run inside before they inhale it. The guys start shrinking and the girls return wondering where did they go. The boys each hitch rides on the girl's shoes and get carried into the house where the adventure begins!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hmm, we shall see where this little journey takes us....

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