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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2016 11:03 AM Title: Making Friends, The Hard Way

Hoo-boy! I'll bet this is where Asha and TJ shrink him. The former, out of over-protective concern for her new stepbrother. And the latter, out of misguided loyalty to Scottie the Not-so-hottie.

In any case, I hope you had a Happy 4th, Dug. :-)

Author's Response:

Interesting premise. Happy 4th to you Cary! (We had our day up here in Canada July 1)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2016 4:51 PM Title: Making Friends, The Hard Way

Not bad trash talking. Some dick jokes, fists clenched, the "hold me back" to intervene.

I never even knew that Nick was even a little bit muscular. You definately sprung that out of nowhere.

Asha just seems to enjoy everything. People, fighting, classes. She seems always happy. TJ though, we can see her expression change. Little interesting that she feels for Nick. I guess she can't stop "her boy".

So is Scott, TJ's boyfriend? Or are they just close?

Hmm. I'm not sure if this counts as making friends. Still interesting to know that these friends are rivals, and who knows, maybe they respect each other's toughness.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I tried to point out nick's athleticism playing hockey. TJ and Scott may or may not be, you know one of those kind of relationships. Things are heating up!

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