Date: June 30 2016 10:11 AM Title: A Brand New School
Sorry, A.R. Youtube claims nothing exists under that heading. I even got the white frown-ey face against the black background!
[Report This]Date: June 29 2016 5:50 PM Title: A Brand New School
I remember Beowulf and I also remember reading Grendel. Good times.
Gosh! I'm attracted to this teacher too. Miss Pennington seems lovely.
Well, I guess it's no surprise that Scott will be one of the shrunken men joining Nick. Now, let's see who the other guy is. I bet his name has 3 letters in it. :)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Sooner than later. ;)
Date: June 29 2016 5:40 PM Title: A Brand New School
I like that you're taking the time to set it up properly. Erotica and horror are so much better when they come out of well developed characters.
As for you, Carycomic, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8y-FGDwjLr0
Author's Response:
I agree building fleshed out characters is much more enjoyable whatever the vehicle. The drawback is having the patience to allow the characters to develop without rusing them to get to the 'action'. Trying to find the mix is tricky. :)
[Report This]Date: June 29 2016 4:55 PM Title: A Brand New School
Part of me hops Scott is just being good-naturedly facetious. But, another part has the uncomfortable feeling that he's going to go too far, out of pure malicious mischief, and Nick will get into a big fist fight with him.
With the black-eyed, bloody-lipped loser turning out to be TJ's boyfriend.
Author's Response:
Scott does seem to be a little more pesty than good natured ribbing. The dynamic between Nick and Scott will become clearer shortly