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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 8:35 PM Title: A Brand New Day

Well, thus far, Asha isn't being the stereotypical wicked stepsister. But, then again, this story is still young. Isn't it?

Author's Response:

Wicked I think is a matter of perspective as I wax philosophical.  We have yet to see what a huge power imbalance does to her id and how he adapts to being on the short end of the stick. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 5:58 PM Title: A Brand New Day

The teasing continuous!!!!
I didn’t realize you were under me
The world play was 200/20!

I love these statements she makes:

"I didn’t realize you were under me"
-this is a reference to unaware.

"Was that you making a fuss down there earlier in the night last evening?”
-this is a reference to when he gets put in her cleavage or panties.

"You must think I’m awful, stomping away on top of you,”
-reference to foot fetish and crushing.

"Don’t worry, I’m sure you will be as quiet as a little mouse,"
-reference to keeping him quiet and shrinking him to the size of a mouse.

Those references were awesome!

Also, I love how she is wearing skin tight clothes, my favorite style!

I love Asha's confidence. It makes me nervous and excited at the same time.

I can't wait for school! Then we can meet the other students and get this show on the road, literally.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Asha is a sassy girl. Thought would might like this character.

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