Date: December 08 2016 3:11 AM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
You always have great stories. Please continue with this one. Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review. I really appreciate your input as it reminds me people invest their time into my tales and the characters I've created. I haven't given up on this one though as with a host of my other stories find myself struggling to find a way to take it and invariably it sits. My hope is to finish all my stories but... on a more positive note I am hoping to renew Bang Your Head soon... :)
Date: October 05 2016 10:12 PM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
Been really enjoying this one. You say you hit a wall, which is a shame. See, myself personally, I'd have taken this a different way. I'd have had asha make him big again, then immediately shrink him again. Make him please her to get big again, then make him a deal that she'd restore him, but only if he agreed she could shrink him whenever she wanted. That way, you could play with the dynamic, the school side, and done something you haven't really done before. Like Nick is about to go on a date, but Asha decided she wanted him that night, so she takes him. The back and forth could have been interesting
[Report This]Date: September 30 2016 10:46 AM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
@TomSpeedy: shameless! You are positively shameless (lol).
Author's Response:
Lest humility get in the way...
Date: September 29 2016 6:43 PM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
@Carycomic,
All Toms make giantess women orgasm powerfully. So powerful that it can make people drown. This was no exception. :)
Author's Response:
Lol
[Report This]Date: September 20 2016 10:38 PM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
Well mabey Scott will finally get through to Hester's "5 year old emotions" who knows? Mabey Scott will fall for Hester. Cliffhangers all around bro
Author's Response:
Hopefully there is enough curiosity to see what happens to keep readers engaged. :)
Date: September 20 2016 3:29 AM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
Great story!
I'd love to be Asha's pet! Scott charming Esther? I have to see this next chapter, LOL
Author's Response:
There would certainly be worse things to be other than Asha's pet...
[Report This]Date: September 19 2016 1:45 PM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
Only time will tell for the little hero, Sir Duggernaut. That and your imagination bro lol
Author's Response:
true enough i suppose, :)
[Report This]Date: September 18 2016 9:24 PM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
Limp arm? Hopefully this doesn't mean R.I.P. Tom, does it? Dun dun da, the suspension continues! Rooting for ya Nick! Nice to find one male tiny who isn't as horny af. Great story buildup I'm on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!! :)
Author's Response:
Hi SoinaGirl thanks for the read and taking the time to share a review. Nick has decision to make. The lady or the tiger?
Date: September 11 2016 2:17 AM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
@edexdexx,
That is such a great point. I should have seen it myself. Well said.
Author's Response:
Yep!
Date: September 10 2016 8:03 PM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
@TomSpeedy Sure she could forcibly have her with him with ease right now, but that'd give her little satisfaction. Every other guy has always done whatever she wanted at a moments notice, but not him. Victory in her mind would be Nick willingly submit to her charms
Author's Response:
Exactly right. :)
Date: September 02 2016 1:08 AM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
@LJin. I like the way you're thinking. Good character. Even if you have to be humiliated, don't give in. Be defianed and if there is no possible way to avoid be stuffed into something, than let it happen without emotion or something that doensn't satisfy them. Judging by there reactions and actions afterwards you can find out with what kind of people you are dealing with and adjust your plans how to deal with them.
Author's Response:
There is so much wreckage in Nick's life and so little he is in control of, this may be a defining moment in his life to try and retain some sense of personal power even in the face of such overwhelming adversity.
Date: August 08 2016 10:30 PM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
If I were Tom, I would charge straight to Asha's panties. He declared his love for her and since Tom is already about to be found anyway, he might as well just go all out and live out his fantasy.
He should find her panties, climb inside and just drift off to sleep. Let his dreams be filled with sex and desire. If he wakes up, the dream becomes a reality.
Date: August 08 2016 7:37 PM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
@Giantesslover122,
Um, choice A means death. You sure about that?
Date: July 19 2016 8:09 PM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
@Duggernaut. Wow, I never even noticed. I wrote down Clarrisa for so many reviews! You gotta reply and tell me this earlier, haha!
Ok, Calista-mom. Carrissa-red head.
This Carrissa girl hasn't even done anything to the story and she gets to play with these tinies too? So there's only 3 guys, but there is Asha, TJ, Hester, Carrissa and Calsista? I guess that means a lot of sharing and threesomes.
Aw, why couldn't Calista be there early. I want to see Tom's face when she walks in! I bet that will be love at first sight.
Ohh! Maybe, 3 girls get Nick, then Hester has Scott and Calista gets Tom. After all, Asha wanted a team against Nick.
Date: July 08 2016 9:02 PM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
When I said Faith, I meant Asha. Both girls from both stories are like the same. Sexy and confident.
Date: June 29 2016 5:29 PM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
My bad! That should read "...hopes Scott."
Now watch some smart-ass provide a link to a Youtube kid drawing numbered squares on a sidewalk. :P
[Report This]Date: June 28 2016 5:30 AM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
Gotta say, I loved the references too.
Author's Response:
Cheeky right? I think it adds a nice dynamic to this character.
Date: June 25 2016 4:13 PM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
@Carycomic,
Fair enough. :)
[Report This]Date: June 25 2016 2:30 PM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
@TomSpeedy: I like to think I give as much popularity as I receive (if not more so).
Author's Response:
You have been very generous and I thank you for making the time to share your thoughts.
Date: June 25 2016 10:36 AM Title: The Tribulations of a Broken Marriage
Haha! Now I know how Carycomic gets so many reviews! While I just did one review for all 5 chapters, he does one for each! Lol!
When I saw this story got a jump to 6 reviews, I thought, "wow, looks like Duggernaut is popular again." But it was just Carycomic.
Author's Response:
That almost sounded like a double jab at Carycomic and I... :D