Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Why didn't I see this earlier... this was like my dream plot, thank you for this amazing story. 10 out of 10. I hope youll continue writing these fantastic TF plots, especially those with the ironic twists and the "surprises". I loved the gf having another lover idea so much, would be great seeing this again, it's so humiliating and like a hit in the face for the guy, not just being tortured like this but then by the guys dick rammed in her ass... one of the hottest plots I read. Also great ending.

Reviewer: six006 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

faved. love your tf stories, this my favorite so far. enjoyed the cheating of his best friend and how he liked giving her anal with "his friend" in between them.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2016 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

What the... DUDE :O This is like the best TF story I ever read. WOW! What a cameback... You rock dude... I always loved your TF stories the most, but this is like your best so far. What a fantastic idea. I love panties TF, the idea with the letter and then the guys best friend cheating on him and his gf. The best was but the idea of Chuck giving her anal, by just spreading her panties a bit by side and leaving it on her, FANTASTIC IDEA!! I came so hard on that part, and the following, the highlight of the story, of where in the worst moment, he flipped back and... oops. Best idea ever. And them be like "shit, think you need to wash those". That was the best, ultimate humiliation I ever read as an idea.

Know what would have been a cool idea too? I got it when the word rip happened. I thought of, what if a round shape around Chucks dick head would have been riped off the panties, unfortunatly the "face" of his friend, and now sent deep as a small shred of fabirc into the intestines of his gf, mixed with shit and cum of his best friend. And them noticng then "shit" I think you need to throw them away, seeing the hole in the back area. Then Adam's mind/his face would be shat out later by his gf, embedded into a turd of hers and cum of his best friend.

For the ending, a cool twisted idea also could have been, her being like "shit, no toilet paper left" and then looking on the worn out panties, and using Adam as toilet paper, trowing it then abused and smeared with shit into the toilet, then her still peeing on him.

Fantasic story, I think your best so far. You rock man, and your ideas. Hope lots more like this will follow. Your ass plots are the best. And the very dark and ironic ones. 20 out of 10 points :] 

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2016 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Perfect. There's always room for more unaware transformation stories.

Reviewer: Chaos_Jeff Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2016 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, and great ending as well

 

I would only wish for a second story where after like 10 replays, he becomes something else or becomes human again, now that wouldd be good :D