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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2016 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 11: My Mom Tries To Get Custody

Hey! Nice to see you back here. I thought this story title sounded familiar. But, you obviously revised your screen name, so I re-read it, regardless. A good thing, too! You seemed to have made Amber's mother a little less altruistic than in the original story. A hunch I'm unable to confirm _or_ deny, however, as the original version seems to have been erased from the Old Archive.

Also, you seem to seriously intend writing a sequel to this classic, as I don't remember a Dr. Nebulous from the ending of the original version. But, again, I can't prove or disprove that belief due to the absence of the latter.

Rest assured, though, I did enjoy reading this version, all the time. So, welcome home. :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks Carycomic! I am also known as Ace Corona, but I use the Deuce Micro name for my underage stuff.

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