Date: July 08 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love this story, very sexy, love the foot descriptions, chapter 1 was amazing when Alice teased and humiliated Anna under her sweaty toes. This chapter as just as good. Please, more like this! And if you want to include some more sex/humiliation scenes been Anna and Shirley that would be great too!
Date: June 29 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I agree 99% with Kentaryu. I've always had a soft spot for family stories, whether Femdom or Shrinking or whatever. The 1 % is the Butt stuff; not a fan of that or the FINAL crussh stories. you have managed to push a lot of my buttons however.
On the technical end I did not see many grammatical/punctuation errors, which is always a plus. Only thing worse than reading an enjoyable story and having errors 'pop' out at you is reading a story that is one solid uninterrupted block of Text. Good job, and Thank you.
Story-wise the situation is fairly common here but that's okay. Your characters are believable and they speak normally, like real people and you seem to have taken the time to work up good reasons for the sudden shift in attitude after Anna shrinks, giving everyoneone some background and history. in so many stories the characters tend to speak like they are shooting for Shakespeare. Real people use contractions. Good job there as well.
I know Anna will probably die a cruel and painfull death eventually but I am looking forward to hopefully a few more chapters before that happens. I am so far enjoying! Thank you for sharing.
Date: June 29 2016 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm really enjoying the story, and you're doing a great job. I check back every day looking forward to the next chapter. I'll be looking forward to your next story too.
On a side note, just wanted to let you know that you double posted the whole of this chapter.
Date: June 21 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
hope she finds someoneto help her, you could havethe story go on into a hide and seek until her husband finds her and reveals he has discovered the cure, as for the vore tag, maybe her aunt eats her but she gets drunk and pukes herr out infront of the husband
Date: June 18 2016 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent job on this one. I found the teasing in the dialogues really well done as well as the descriptions of the situation, specifically the feet part. The butt portion might be a little lacking compared to that one, although still pretty damn good. I guess that's understable since it's not the focus in that scene. Also, I loved the personalities of the characters, specially Alice's.
By the way, I think there's a couple of lines in which you inverted the Alice's and Ana's names in the middle of the story.
A complete fan of this kind of scenario, hopefully there will be more of Alice in the last part but I'm sure it will be a good one regardless.