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Reviewer: Bluegoose Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2019 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 2: Bureaucracy and Fry Sauce

I love this story, and for many fancy and long-winded reasons, but I'm too tired for that right now. What I am NOT too tired for right now is to defend my Fry-Sauce lineage. I ran a racket in my elementary school mixing up fry-sauce every lunch in the cafeteria and exchanging it for lunches. Obviously I didn't have paprika or onion powder, which led to subpar sauce, but I would never add Worcestershire sauce even if I had it at hand. For Fry-Sauce, as versatile and tunable a conconction as it is in all it's regional variations, simply isn't fry-sauce with Worcestershire sauce included. Fry-Sauce with Worcestershire is generally considered "burger sauce" or, in Idaho "Idaho Fry Sauce", ironically used a lot less with fries and moreso with burgers or steak. As old Uncle Ripple who runs the 70 year-old burger shop up the road would say: Fry-Sauce wasn't an invention, it was a dang miracle.

 

(Disclaimer: the statements above are mostly satirical...mostly)

Reviewer: matabe182 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2017 10:12 PM Title: Epilogue: Escape Clauses and Whipped Cream

Hey. So, I literally just made an account for this website after being on it for years JUST to make a review for this story.

I just want to say this is 100% my favorite story on this entire website. It was so sweet and cute seeing these two characters go from best friends to lovers and in the most well-written way possible. Plus, the dialogue between the two made it even more real and sweet to me.

I always love gentle, romantic stories like these on this site as opposed to the rougher ones on here. I'm a sucker for these kinds of stories, but yours sir might be in one of my favorites ever.Thank you for making such a wonderful and sweet story, I hope to see these two precious characters back in a story soon. 

Reviewer: Sir Purple Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 1:18 AM Title: Epilogue: Escape Clauses and Whipped Cream

what an awesome story it was. Full of cutness, kindess, sercastic comments, and vorashios thouts. Exactly my cup of tea. It's really hard to find that kind of stories in these day.

I thinck the vest part was chepters 3-4 whick got to it's climex in Darcy's confession that led to Andrew's confession, it was so emotionall.

i can only hope to see more from you in the future and especially if it's going to be medevil time story just like your first story. Also if you ever run out of ideas you should check the story Olympus. I was so sad to see it cut in the middle and always hoped somone will finish it.

 

PS you actully made me stop reading my book, The name of the wind, in ornder to finish this story :D



Author's Response: Sir wolf, thank you for reading! I am very happy that you enjoyed this piece, and I am glad you appreciate the little nuances as well :) I really did try and focus on the relationship between the two characters, and so writing that bit in ch 3-4 was fairly challenging- it's wonderful to hear that you think it's good! Anyhow, plans for Darcy and Andrew will continue- in due time. Hopefully sooner than later. Ha, I usurped Name of the Wind? Suck on that, Rothfuss!! :) :) :)

Reviewer: Sir Purple Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2016 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

I wil start by saying that i only read the first chepter now but i can see this is a great story. There is a very special writing type in this story.

 

I remmember reading your story about matt abd Emilia a year ago or so and i was very happy to discover now you still wtiting.

I wondering now if you areworking on another story now or havee one in mind?



Author's Response: Hello sir wolf! First off, thank you very much for the feedback- I appreciate it very much and I am happy that you read Matt and Amelia in the past! In regards to your question, yes, I am currently working on a couple of short stories and also a big collaboration project with another author on this website. I wish I could say more but we haven't gone public with it yet. the short stories will be released every once in a while and the project will hopefully be stated relatively soon, depending on the various workloads (both real life and Internet) of my coauthor and myself. I hope to keep impressing on you, as I truly hope you enjoy the rest of the story! :)

Reviewer: Max333 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2016 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

Amazing story. Congratulations. Hope I'll get to read more from you soon !



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, max! I definitely plan on writing more, and hopefully with what's comin down the pipe, it will be relatively soon. I may pump out a commission or other piece soon. Thank you again! :)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2016 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

Well done, take a bow. This is pure excellence. 



Author's Response: Dude, you flatter me :) thank you so much for reading and the constant support!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2016 9:21 PM Title: Epilogue: Escape Clauses and Whipped Cream

Great story. I really enjoyed watching these two grow closer and explore the potential of a multi-size romance. Some absolutely top notch gentle interaction. Telling the epilogue from Sara's perplexed point of view was a nice touch. I hope we get to see more of these characters.



Author's Response:

Pixis, thanks so much for the support on this one- I really appreciate it, and I'm very very very pleased that you dig the gentle interaction. :) Darcy and Andrew will most assuredly return for more adventures. Thanks a bunch, man!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2016 9:12 PM Title: Epilogue: Escape Clauses and Whipped Cream

A fabulous conclusion to a fabulous story, V-7. I especially loved the imagery of the suitably perplexed Sara listening at Darcy (and Andrew)'s door! Of course, while her hindsighted suggestion might have worked for her, personally, I have no doubt her bosses would prove to be absolutely addicted to just the kind of paper work D&A were foresighted enough to supply!*


*And doesn't that always seem to be the case with higher-ups in general?

Author's Response:

There's a second fetish here in this story- bureaucracy. Cary, thanks so much for the continued support! I thought that having the epilogue come from the social worker's perspective might be a nice touch- get us out of Darcy and Andrew's head for a bit. Anyhow, did you know that you won the commission game? Dude, I would love to write you something. Contact me via my profile on here- just click my username and then click the orange [contact] button to shoot me an email and we can talk about it. Thank you for the constant support and encouragement in this piece! 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2016 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

Feels so right, not dirty at all. Overall an excellent piece of fiction! Darcy's last line reveals why this story is called Ruhn, clever girl....



Author's Response:

I think so too, Nostory. I even think I may have put the story's title back in ch 4 as well! Thank you so much for the continued support!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2016 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 10: Latch

Moral of the chapter, Darcy?

Once you've had shrunk, you never return to hunk.

Author's Response: I expect Darcy has a new favorite sex position now. Thanks for reading Cary, and adding it to your favorites! :)

Reviewer: Saftkeur Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2016 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 10: Latch

What a lovely climax, in every sense of the word! I know I've spoken to the same means before, but it's a shame that such romantic plots aren't toyed with more often, especially those that pay heed to the challenges of size along with the benefits.

I'll be looking forward to the epilogue for that same reason, as well!



Author's Response: Thank you very much, Saft! I really appreciate your feedback and support of the plot. I was worried that it wouldn't o over well but I'm very to have found a few supporters. Expect the epilogue shorty. Thank you again so much for reading and your support! :)

Reviewer: GTS33 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

Have to admit, was reluctant to read at first but the story really grew on me. I'm thoroughly enjoying it so far. Keep up the great work! 

Hope to see more great stories like this one in the future :)



Author's Response:

Well, I am super glad you stuck with it, man. Thank you so much for giving it a shot! 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 9: Some Like The Party, Some Like The Dance, Some Like To Make Romance

Sex, sex, JUST DO IT!



Author's Response: *Shia Labouef giving that speech at the window of Darcy and Andrew's apartment* DONT LET YOUR DREAMS BE JUST DREAMS

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2016 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 9: Some Like The Party, Some Like The Dance, Some Like To Make Romance

LOL! This story reminded me of how Mel Brooks brushed his teeth in HIGH ANXIETY.

"Up and down and up and down. And side-side-side-side-side! In and out and in and out. And side-side-side-side-side!"

Author's Response: Mel brooks is a goddamn national treasure. I need to rewatch blazing saddles. "Little bastard shot me in the ass." Thank you for reading, Cary!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 8: Carte Blanche

Very sexy chapter. I love the imagery of Andrew exploring her as if she's a mountain. And I love that Darcy seems to be getting into it. Judging by those last lines, I'm very interested to see where the next chapter goes. Sounds like mouth play is next on the agenda?



Author's Response: Dude, thank you so much- I really love writing these two and I love to have Darcy explore her inner giantess. As far as the last two lines... Hard vore. Hard vore for like eight more chapters. ....... That's a lie... In truth, I do think you will like where this goes. :) thank you for reading, Pixis! It's always great to hear your input!

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2016 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 8: Carte Blanche

I'm finally all caught up. Great to see Andrew and Darcy starting to be a couple. I can imagine all kinds of fun with these two. While I personally would've enjoyed more foot action, I can't complain. Can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: I really tried to balance story and fetish content in this one- who knows- maybe some smutty piece may turn up in a later date that focuses on Darcy and Andrew in particular... :)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2016 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 8: Carte Blanche

Tell Andrew to be careful when navigating the backwoods, there may be sudden discharges of noxious gas from cracks in the ground .



Author's Response: Isn't that the current theory on the Bermuda Triangle? Some gas that leaks up to the surface of the water and either kills/incapacitates pilots? Anyway, Darcy hasn't had cabbage recently, so I think Andrew is safe for now.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2016 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 8: Carte Blanche

At this point, Andrew should start improvising a love song. Something like..."What's new, Darcy-cat? Whoa-oh, whoa-oh, whoa-oh!"

With deepest apologies to Tom Jones.

Author's Response: Every time I hear that song, I always think of Mr. Nancy from Neil Gaiman's American Gods/Anansi Boys

Reviewer: Saftkeur Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2016 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 8: Carte Blanche

I just love the way this story's been going! By far my favorite element though is their relationshipp; the way Darcy fantasizes about Andrew, and yet never forgets that he's still a person. The awkwardness of them trying to make this work between them, fun and sexy but without glossing over the literally massive difficulties of their interactions. There are those little moments where it's almost a tease for the reader, moments where other stories might push realism/plausibility a little to one side to allow for more indulgence in these fantasies, but then the story itself makes up for all of that.

I'm looking forward to the rest!



Author's Response: Thank you very much, saft! I really tried to focus on their relationship rather than just size dynamic and I also focused on how a couple might reaaaaalllllly act if they were put in a situation like Darcy and Andrew are in now. Thank you very much for your input and insights! Thank you for reading! :)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2016 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

The Titan series is a long bht fulfilling slog if you get into it :)

Oh and as for the story, its the current ongoing story most likely to feature romance .



Author's Response: I was looking at it today- it does look rather interesting.

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