Date: October 29 2016 8:16 PM Title: Beach,Bikini,Babes
My favorite part is Jessica posing. So adorable. Well done, nostory! :)
Author's Response:
She's a sexy giantess who doesn't realise the effect she has on people, its super adorable. Thanks dude!
Date: October 29 2016 2:15 PM Title: Beach,Bikini,Babes
Gotta respect Jess for deciding to give the couple their space and not get too involved, despite her feelings. Anyway, I'm surprised you decided to keep Caitlyn in this story, in fact she's a far bigger character than in the original! I seem to recall you saying in the original in a response to a review that you wish you didn't have her in the story since it made it tougher for Jack and Jessica to end up together...
Author's Response:
I regretted saying and doing that because in the original, it didn't give Jack and Jessica an obstacle to be together. I should have kept Caitlin alive in the original or at least killed her off convincingly. This is my way of fixing that, whether Jessica and Jack end up together remains to be seen.Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2016 12:16 PM Title: Beach,Bikini,Babes
She appears to be having fun modeling. But it's time for her to make a move on Jack. Or vice versa! Can't let Caitlin have the victory.
Author's Response:
She needs the fun , after being cooped up in her tent and island. I don't know if she should be the third party, even if one of the first two is a bitch. Thanks for the review!