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Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2016 7:29 AM Title: Me, A Model?

Wonder what Eva has in mind. Jessica can't exactly model the latest swimsuit since she wouldn't fit. She could advertise non-clothing related items: tourist locations, beverages, food, restaurants. Simply capturing a portion of her body in the frame would draw ones attention, tho perhaps more to Jessica than to the item being advertised.

I'd say it's a risk for Eva, though likely one worth taking.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. 

I think Jessica could model clothes, it would require making a very large size but if Eva has the means to do it, Jessica could model clothing too. It would make use of her looks too and perhaps there might be other incentives if she does clothes too? Given that those clothes could only be worn by Jessica or the Statue of Liberty, you get what I mean......

 

Yeah if it works, Eva's company would taste an unprecedented level of success. Jessica alone would get attention , as a giantess and now a giantess model she is going to draw attention just by turning up; like if The Pope turned up to officiate a wedding. You know it will be on every paper in ever country. 

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2016 5:06 PM Title: Me, A Model?

Wow, Jessica as a giant model. That's a pretty cool idea. And it would certainly solve their income problems. I sure hope Ms. Schneider has the funds to cover this sort of venture. It would take an awful lot of material to cover those giant curves.



Author's Response:

I don't know if their income problem could even be called a problem ,Jack is after all, filthy rich. He can afford to do it but Caitlin has been on his ass over Jessica's expense costing a bomb. Yeah but if Jessica did swimsuits or lingerie then I think they could save money on that, until she can find a way to get Jessica into something that covers more. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: versusterminus7 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2016 10:17 AM Title: Me, A Model?

Very happy to see this chapter fully edited and posted- excellent stuff. Again, Caitlin does have a point- Jessica is not exactly in a position to argue- not when she consumes so much more resources that others. Still- modeling would beat out the other suggestions we discussed via email (though, it would be kinda hot to see Jessica let loose and plow through a condemned building for demolition). Lastly, there's something very captivating about this chapter- it's a rising action, it feels like all the build up prior to this is coming to a logical conclusion. I hope Jessica continues to learn more about herself and her abilities- and if she decides to do modeling, I think she'll be great at it. Also, super cute the way Jack carried on about Jessica. :)

Author's Response:

I hadn't noticed it until you pointed it out but what I've released so far has built up into this moment, an entire arc of the story. After this, it would be something else entirely as she jumps into all this. I would not mind seeing Jessica use building demolition as a way of venting, punching entire blocks down because she needs to release that stress in a healthy way. 

Thanks for the review and all the help you've given so far!

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