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Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2016 3:34 PM Title: Jess A Mess

Great chapter! As much as I dislike Harold, he made se valid points, it wasn't like he had bad intentions by fishing at the lake, it was just a grumpy old man having some alone time on his boat. Jessica is a guest there and was pretty patronizing. If I wasn't attracted to her and she came to my neck of the woods with that attitude I'd be pretty pissed myself. I'm a guy that can appreciate some peace and quiet...



Author's Response:

Harold's a grumpy young man, there will likely be some grumpy old men. So far it seems people still think Harold and Caitlin have valid concerns, fair enough. They do,for now....

Reviewer: versusterminus7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2016 2:22 PM Title: Jess A Mess

Pusssaaaaaah. Love it! Well done, nostory. I really love the way you describe Jessica's body and her actions in this Lilliputian world. Tenouttaten.

Author's Response:

Thanks! 

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