[Report This]Date: July 03 2016 1:16 AM Title: Teething Problems
As always, Harold is extremely punchable.
Great stuff, nostory!
Author's Response:
He has a face like a boot: Everyone wants to put their foot in it.
Date: July 02 2016 2:56 PM Title: Teething Problems
I found the timeskip between this chapter and the last one a bit jarring. As for Caitlin, I can see why she'd be angry, Jessica is beautiful and can't exactly be modest with her clothing. Harold seems like a prick but Jessica is kinda douchy in this story too, not a violent GTS but kind of abit of a douche sometimes, so I wouldn't put it past her to step on a car or something if someone ticks her off (which isn't hard). Anyway, this story doesn't get updated too often so I wont hold my breath for an update anytime soon, but Im glad you're continuing it!
Author's Response:
Oh, I guess I didn't put enough thought into the transition. Its a bit harsh for Caitlin to pick on Jessica's lack of modesty seeing as stores don't stock her clothes. Hmm...would Jessica step on a car? Possibly but it may be deliberate. I'll actually update this weekly for the next month or so because I've written up to chapter 5 so you'll see that! Thanks for the review!