Date: June 07 2016 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
hey i really like what youve done so far!
I was hoping if you would include a lot more unaware content? how much of that is planned? I'm hoping the majority personally xd. It could be related to Iris' gadgets or shawn could be mistaken as part of some food and smelled,sucked on,nibbled until iris spots some better food.
good job
Author's Response:
Glad to hear that you've enjoyed what's come forth thusfar. Unaware content will certainly not be the majority, but that doesn't mean more cannot be included. I'll see if I can think of somewhere to add some. Thanks for your review, I appreciate it.
Date: June 07 2016 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Good story so far, although that bit with the "so hungry I lose control" is kind of a cheap excuse for some vore scenes in my opinion. Still, I'm loving this story so far, Iris is an interesting GTS and Shawn is a decent protag, everything is going well so far!
Author's Response:
In all honesty, I probably could have come up with something more interesting for that aspect. Then again, I will neither confirm or deny that Shawn or perhaps some other character I introduce will be eaten due to Iris's out of control when hungry aspect. Either way, I'm glad that you're loving the story. I'd hope that Iris is interesting, and it's good to hear that Shawn does well enough for himself.