Date: June 14 2016 9:00 AM Title: Forbidden Fruit
Really hope to see this continued, really enjoying the stroy. Do you do requests I would love to see a similar story with mother and son.
Author's Response:
I can hear out a request. No promises though since I tend to be fairly busy.
Alternatively I do a lot of commissions, which would be more of a guarantee but would sadly cost money
[Report This]Date: June 03 2016 2:56 PM Title: Forbidden Fruit
This is a great story, I hope it continues!
[Report This]Date: June 03 2016 3:05 AM Title: Forbidden Fruit
Very interesting. Veeerrryyy excited to see how the follow-up interaction plays out.
Date: June 02 2016 5:50 PM Title: Forbidden Fruit
Love this story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: June 02 2016 1:22 PM Title: Forbidden Fruit
It's great to see the continuation of this series. I really enjoyed the first one. Jojo and Daisy's relationship is interesting and it looks like it's about to become even more so. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: June 02 2016 12:25 PM Title: Forbidden Fruit
Well ain't this a treat. Happy to see a sequel to the first. Jojo's relationship is a stranger side, but after six years of near isolation, can one really blame him? Not trying to excuse his actions, but this seems uncharted territory for both he and daisy. I'm unsure were this will go, but I hope daisy and Jo can come out on top. Hell, even if something not so good for Jo happens, this ought to be a great tale. Great stuff, asterisk.
Date: June 02 2016 10:56 AM Title: Forbidden Fruit
Good stuff here. You find a nice balance between sinking into sensory detail and outlining Jojo's mentality on his twisted relationship to his sister. Speaking of balance, I appreciate the tone of their relationship as something casually teasing but with the threat of some antagonism if the truth comes out.
Author's Response:
Glad you appreciate it. I rather like the idea of a harmless, if not teasing relationship they have. Although fact is Jojo still has needs and he understands that what he wants is wrong. It adds an interesting layer to it, especially if/when his sister finds out.