Date: June 14 2016 9:00 AM Title: Forbidden Fruit
Really hope to see this continued, really enjoying the stroy. Do you do requests I would love to see a similar story with mother and son.
I can hear out a request. No promises though since I tend to be fairly busy.
Alternatively I do a lot of commissions, which would be more of a guarantee but would sadly cost money
Date: June 06 2016 1:47 PM Title: Crossing the Line
What a sweet, odd, and amazing chapter all in one. The description of how Jojo lost himself in his lust for Daisy's feet was great. I find myself very much hoping for a continuation once again. Keep up the great work!
Well I do have ideas for more stories with these two. Now whether I do them or not who knows. Either way, I'm glad you liked it.
Date: June 06 2016 11:01 AM Title: Crossing the Line
I really like the ending paragraphs- they really highlight some of the difficulties of daisy and jojos relationships. How things taken apart can't be put back in place. Really great writing, asterisk. Hope to see even more from you.
Thanks a lot. I do enjoy writing these two a fair amount. Glad to hear other people find their dichotomy interesting as well.
Date: June 04 2016 3:43 PM Title: Coming Out
I definitely wasn't expecting Daisy to accept Jojo's fetish so quickly, but you did say this was going to be three chapters. I'm excited to see how things go in the next chapter.
Haha. You'll see
Date: June 02 2016 1:22 PM Title: Forbidden Fruit
It's great to see the continuation of this series. I really enjoyed the first one. Jojo and Daisy's relationship is interesting and it looks like it's about to become even more so. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: June 02 2016 12:25 PM Title: Forbidden Fruit
Well ain't this a treat. Happy to see a sequel to the first. Jojo's relationship is a stranger side, but after six years of near isolation, can one really blame him? Not trying to excuse his actions, but this seems uncharted territory for both he and daisy. I'm unsure were this will go, but I hope daisy and Jo can come out on top. Hell, even if something not so good for Jo happens, this ought to be a great tale. Great stuff, asterisk.
Date: June 02 2016 10:56 AM Title: Forbidden Fruit
Good stuff here. You find a nice balance between sinking into sensory detail and outlining Jojo's mentality on his twisted relationship to his sister. Speaking of balance, I appreciate the tone of their relationship as something casually teasing but with the threat of some antagonism if the truth comes out.
Glad you appreciate it. I rather like the idea of a harmless, if not teasing relationship they have. Although fact is Jojo still has needs and he understands that what he wants is wrong. It adds an interesting layer to it, especially if/when his sister finds out.