Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2017 3:10 PM Title: The University

Yay! You're back! I love the details of the world you created for this story - the walkways, the monorail, the little alcove above the tables, the social mores. Great stuff!

Not gonna lie, with how hungry Ashley was, I was kind if hoping for an almost-vore moment. But regardless, this was a good read. The sizeism and prejudice theme is very timely at the moment (unfortunately).

Author's Response:

To be honest, I was very tempted to go the vore/mouthplay route as that's my favorite scenario, but decided to restrain myself this time and focus more on world and character development.  (I even had one written for the end in my first draft.)  Never fear, I'll be back with more!