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Reviewer: Bug Lover Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2016 11:27 AM Title: The Cinema

I hope they didn't go see episode VII because that was definitely not a good movie.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2016 4:38 PM Title: The Cinema

Fun story. It was pretty obvious where they were going to land but I enjoyed it anyway. I was actually hoping they'd wind up in her mouth and have to make a daring escape but this was exciting too. I loved the Death Star exhaust port analogy. Very funny.



Author's Response:

Thanks Pixis!  I had considered going further with the mouth escapade, but decided to go with the Death Star analogy, as well as to show that Parvians weren't completely helpless in situations like this.  But that isn't to say that it will always work out for them...stay tuned!

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