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Reviewer: Joshrogan1 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2017 3:45 PM Title: The Flight

Awesome batch of stories, especially the university chapter, have you thoughts on maybe a chapter centred arounda parvian/magnian gym? :)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2017 5:05 AM Title: The Flight

I want to see what happens to Ashley, will there be a continuation? 



Author's Response:

I'm planning on it, yes.  Can't tell you when, as I've got a couple more chapters/scenarios in the works that I'd like to finish first, but I have plans for these characters!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2017 3:10 PM Title: The University

Yay! You're back! I love the details of the world you created for this story - the walkways, the monorail, the little alcove above the tables, the social mores. Great stuff!

Not gonna lie, with how hungry Ashley was, I was kind if hoping for an almost-vore moment. But regardless, this was a good read. The sizeism and prejudice theme is very timely at the moment (unfortunately).



Author's Response:

To be honest, I was very tempted to go the vore/mouthplay route as that's my favorite scenario, but decided to restrain myself this time and focus more on world and character development.  (I even had one written for the end in my first draft.)  Never fear, I'll be back with more!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2016 10:02 AM Title: The Flight

Awesome, I feel like I could add a chapter to this world. 

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2016 2:05 AM Title: The Roommate

Always great to see a new chapter of this story. I was very excited that it was a mouth focused one as well. A very perilous and sexy operation. I know these are one-shots but a Parvian rooming with three giant women sounds like it has potential for all sorts of scenarios.

(FYI, I think you called Daisy Kate at one point towards the end when she's eating the ice cream.)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I've found that it's a lot easier to write these short episodes rather than a big long epic like the Cairnbridge stories.  (I'm going to finish The Manor one of these days, or I'll change my name to George R.R. Martin...)  I've definitely considered following up on the chapters I've published and the ones I'm working on.  I've tried to finish them in ways that allow me to revisit the charaters.

Good catch on the name mix up.  I had hastily finished the story yesterday after sitting on it for a month.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2016 9:54 PM Title: The Flight

I love this series, its so fun to read this slice of life type of story in a mixed-size world. Will it ever go round-robin? 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm definitely considering the suggestion.  I've got a few chapters I'm working on that will help to establish the world.  Once I get those published, I'll de more than willing to let others contribute.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2016 11:04 AM Title: The Flight

Any chance this will become a round robin?

Reviewer: Bug Lover Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2016 11:27 AM Title: The Cinema

I hope they didn't go see episode VII because that was definitely not a good movie.

Reviewer: DropKickJeeves Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2016 12:54 AM Title: The Flight

I've been using this site for awhile! Just.. As a guest.. Until now! And it's just so I can review this story. I love it! I've read a lot of other stories around this site, and I never once thought to actually review one.. I always thought it would be kinda awkward.. I mean really, a lot of these stories are usually way too graphic to be in public, so I didnt think I'd ever need to talk about what happens in them right? xD But, I actually really do like this one in particular. It has its own originality I think! It's got it's own place and stands out from other stories in my opinion c: I mean really there are only two chapters yeah, but I don't usually even see short stories like these all that much here. You really put an amazing blend on the mix of action, lighthearted moments, and the giantess themed things all around! In one chapter I already feel immersed into it. Bringing an exciting little adventure from such a usual activity like being on a plane and movie-going by just a little size difference. I really enjoy reading these stories and I hope to see more from you! :3

Author's Response:

Wow, thanks for the kind review!  My goal in writing these stories is to do something different.  It makes it more interesting for me and helps me to write.  I liked the idea of doing short stories because I got a little burned out trying to write the next epic novel, as well as that it opens up the possibility of writing about more mundane, every day activities like what I've done so far.  I've got several other scenarios that I'm currently dabbling with.  Hope you enjoy what comes next!

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2016 9:03 PM Title: The Flight

Great stories so far.

Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2016 8:13 PM Title: The Flight

Ooh more mishaps! I can understand why the boys would fight, I was pissed when someone dropped a Star Wars spoiler on me too. Wanted to punch that guy....



Author's Response:

I came close to writing it out in the story, but I decided not to just in case a reader hadn't gotten around to seeing The Force Awakens yet...

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2016 4:38 PM Title: The Cinema

Fun story. It was pretty obvious where they were going to land but I enjoyed it anyway. I was actually hoping they'd wind up in her mouth and have to make a daring escape but this was exciting too. I loved the Death Star exhaust port analogy. Very funny.



Author's Response:

Thanks Pixis!  I had considered going further with the mouth escapade, but decided to go with the Death Star analogy, as well as to show that Parvians weren't completely helpless in situations like this.  But that isn't to say that it will always work out for them...stay tuned!

Reviewer: amazonianniall Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2016 8:01 AM Title: The Flight

Great story, really enjoy the way you write and the pacing.

Would love if you got more explicit sometimes too.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 1:06 AM Title: The Flight

This is really good, it looks like a lot of misunderstandings since Desi just sat on him. Maybe an inter-size relationship as one chapter? 

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 12:11 AM Title: The Flight

This is awesome! I love the concept and the world you're setting up with this. I look forward to more inter-size shenanigans in future chapters.

Reviewer: YellowBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 4:53 PM Title: The Flight

Nice story, I would like to see more :D

Reviewer: Kaminayh Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 3:22 PM Title: The Flight

Nice story, I would like to see more :D

Reviewer: Kaminayh Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 3:22 PM Title: The Flight

Nice story, I would like to see more :D

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