Date: May 14 2018 7:29 AM Title: Science Day with Lovely Mari
I don’t want to say it’s a waste, because I’m extremely glad to have you, but if you ever turn your talents to published work, I would buy it in a heartbeat. You’re one of the most superb authors I’ve ever encountered on a fetish site. The piratey arc shows a lot of improvement in your writing, too. Well done.
Thank you for the encouragement! Those are some very kind words, I apprecite them very much. I do have a book of short stories, an epub on my Smashwords site or a few copies of the paperback version. I would like to attempt a fulllength novel at some point, so your support comes at an opportune time. Thank you again.
Date: August 21 2016 10:46 PM Title: Science Day with Lovely Mari
Loved the exploration scene as the blonde witch struggled across Mari's enormous sleeping body before realising she was on the very witch she insulted! Brilliant!
Thank you! I realized most people would pretty quickly piece together what was going on, but that didn't stop me from going all the way to the end.
Date: June 21 2016 8:06 AM Title: Science Day with Lovely Mari
I love your playful writing style. I especially like how each chapter (or group of chaptersr) is so different from one another. It's like reading a book of fairy tales. I don't think I've ever read anything like it. But the recent chapters have shifted away from the giga sized Mary to focusing on the small people she has unexpectedly brought with her from her trips. That's fine, playing writing about different sizes is great since it offers variety, and the writing is still great, but it almost feels like there's two completely different stories barely glued together. Your initial description of the story said something about you trying out a giga-sized story for the first time. Now it's changed. So you seem to be aware of the shift in the story as well.
Thanks for the kind words! Yes, mainly these stories were supposed to be descriptions of the adventures of a giantess I'm consulting with. I've been trying to understand her motivation, learn what she wants. But in the course of this, as you noticed, there is a story unfolding with the Tinies. It entertains me to pursue that (as I can only write about a Giga giantess destroying city after city for so long), but I can understand how people who came for the giantess would feel misled. It may be that I will never truly understand the Giga story and I'm reaching too far.
Date: June 03 2016 12:58 PM Title: Beach Safety and Mari-time Law
Ive been enjoying your shrinking stories since the Deconstruction series. love how your women have big butts and the tiny men so often end up in or abused by a giantess anus! hope more of that is here. (i love gts poop and fart scenes!)
Thanks for the encouragement! Well, you know what they say: write what you know. And I know I love a nice, round butt and all the possibilities it holds.
The goddess I'm working with isn't necessarily into that kind of thing, but you may rest assured other stories in other series will be dedicated to it. Be sure to check out "The Tiny Scrubbing Bubble" in my list (though I'm sure you have).
Date: June 01 2016 4:46 PM Title: Science Day with Lovely Mari
Still an excellent story. The lack of reviews is rather surprising.
TELL ME ABOUT IT. I'm thinking we're entering the generation of entitlement, feeling no compunction to respond.
But thank you for your kind review. It is very much appreciated!
Date: May 30 2016 3:16 PM Title: Science Day with Lovely Mari
Oh man, those first few chapters were hot! I loved the stadium vore and the detailed description of the environment around the giga giantess. I also liked how there was an introduction and dispatch of a much smaller giantess (I think this should have been explored more). Anyway, the story seemed to trail off for me with all the military stuff going around. I think it would have been better to just follow the giantess witch. Great story overall.
Thank you for speaking up! This is my first foray into writing Mega and Giga giantesses. I'm actually working with a giantess on this, and she loves confronting the military, so what can I do?
Date: May 25 2016 1:43 PM Title: Science Day with Lovely Mari
Ithica, Lansing, Detroit.......wish she would've swung left :) Anyway, great story!
Thanks so much! If you ever find out how to control and redirect a two-mile-tall giantess, I'm sure the rest of us would love to learn your secret.
Date: May 25 2016 9:11 AM Title: Science Day with Lovely Mari
Very detailed and well written. Would love to see Mari at different sizes (like under a mile) in future stories.
Thanks for saying so! The first one was ridiculously detailed as kind of a personal challenge (and a matter of curiosity).
I can only say that Lovely Mari chooses her own sizes from day to day, and I'm not permitted to weigh in on that... though I agree with you.