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Reviewer: bailey69 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2017 3:55 PM Title: Bonding time

you can't realy tell anything about the story because it doesn't go anywhere ,write some more so a person can juge

Reviewer: vanillaTHUNDAR Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2016 10:09 PM Title: Family breakfast

I like how brief your chapters are. It is a rare skill to be able to ellaborate with out sounding boring, but a rarer skill to keep it concise with out losing your point. Really, excellent job! Also, I love where this is going. Love the tags and cannot wait to see what you sling at us!



Author's Response:

Thanks! It means a lot!

Reviewer: anton1991 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 3:54 PM Title: Family breakfast

If you're up for opinions, I like a little underwear play



Author's Response:

Definitly something I play to eperiment with!

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 8:29 AM Title: Mornings are tough

Great so far!

You may also enjoy reading/contributing to this round-robin multi-sized world story.
http://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=3984

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 8:02 PM Title: Mornings are tough

Pretty good so far :)

Reviewer: anton1991 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 2:32 PM Title: Mornings are tough

Great start, really hope you'll pull through with the story. Looking forward for the next chapter(s)!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Hoping to keep this a a continious project so I can promise more chapters!

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