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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow! I just realized that this was your story. Interesting to see a grow story rather than a shrink one from you.

I prefer shrink becuase I like it when the world has no idea that a person is hiding a shrunken person. However, I will still follow this story just like all of your stories becuase of your reputation as a writer.

I'm a little worried that with these new stories, Tom's story will be forgotten. If that is the case, then shoebox will be my new favorite to follow as the giantess and shinkees are interesting to root for.

As far as new stories, you do a great job writing stories with multiple characters in them. I was wondering if you considered having like only 2 characters in a short story and developing them over time. (Husband and wife. Boyfriend and girlfriend. Neighbors, classmates, coworkers.) I know you like to introduce new characters as a way of "keeping things interesting" but I'm wondering if you could keep things interesting with just 2 people. Might be a challenge but it's worth a shot. (You could have additional characters, just not like 10 more like your other stories.)

After reading all 3 chapters, I'm hooked. These girls want revenge on Daryl for being a greedy guy and for lying to them.

Will they have a giantess foursome? I saw giantess 3some's in your stories but never a 4some. Maybe this is it!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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