Date: May 11 2016 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was amazing. I don't often write reviews, because most stories don't have that special something, that your story does. And I need to tell you that. I'm neutral on the whole BBW thing, so what really got to me, was the unaware aspect. And the way it was portrayed. He didn't do it to get off, he did it to save money. That's something I can appreciate, because I enjoy when characters don't enjoy their situation.
Please, write more, because you're somebody I could look forward to reading. Such great work, and I truly hope to see more great stories in the future.
That really means a lot to me. I have some ideas cooking around in my head. We'll see how I get them out.