Reviews For Complacency Kills
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Reviewer: TheTinyMan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2016 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was amazing. I don't often write reviews, because most stories don't have that special something, that your story does. And I need to tell you that. I'm neutral on the whole BBW thing, so what really got to me, was the unaware aspect. And the way it was portrayed. He didn't do it to get off, he did it to save money. That's something I can appreciate, because I enjoy when characters don't enjoy their situation.

 

Please, write more, because you're somebody I could look forward to reading. Such great work, and I truly hope to see more great stories in the future.



Author's Response:

That really means a lot to me. I have some ideas cooking around in my head. We'll see how I get them out.

Reviewer: ShadowVizard Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2016 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome Story hope you make another unaware bbw story !!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I noticed not many people are into writing unaware BBW stuff, so I felt it brewing in me.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2016 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, great story. You describe dans hell very well. Very enjoyable.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

That means a lot. I was actually worried for a second I'd not been detailed enough.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2016 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice first story. I agree with GuyGoneSmall, I'd love to see more like this.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I don't write stuff very often, so it's nice to hear it was a good read.

Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2016 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely love this story. Would love more unaware scenes with friends as well as Liz. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Thanks much. I actually got some of my mental inspiration from your work.

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