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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2016 6:00 PM Title: Jacob

Very good story.

Just needs a little clean-up of grammar and spelling.

For example: "chocking" is something you do to prevent truck tires from rolling backwards. The word you intend is spelled "choking" - to choke someone or something to prevent air or fluids from moving through it.

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