Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2017 4:25 PM Title: Daily Grind

it's always exciting to see a new story from you! wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I really liked marie's character. how she's over being a giantess. how her mind is pretty much everywhere else but the rampage she's carrying out. it's very interesting to read the thoughts of a veteran giantess simply going through the motions at this point. even still, the destruction was very satisfying. frank may have not been pleased, but I greatly enjoyed the read!

as always, your descriptions are vivid and leap off the page. frank's cheeks being the colors of "ripe apples" really stood out to me. you paint such a wonderfully crisp picture in the mind with your words. and the way you write: there are no gaps, it all flows so well. your sense of humor also added a lot to this, for me. there were some genuinely hilarious bits!

also, you are truly a master when it comes to ending a story on a satisfying note, and leaving the reader dreaming on. even with the story finished, I'll be imagining what might come for marie next, and what came for her before this tale. as always you've proven here incredibly deft when it comes to a short-form tale. marie reads like a real person, who lives and breathes, and it's all very believable.

I also love the world you've created here. the idea of rampage, inc, and the portals being used. I love this kind of stuff, and often include similar details in my own fantasies, so it's really a pleasure to see how you so skillfully include such elements.

thank you, as always, for the marvelous read!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words! You're always such a thoughtful reviewer, and I appreciate your feedback very much. :)

I've been trying to push myself to write more, and I figured that I'd try to capture a jaded giantess who has grown bored with rampaging. Oh, and perhaps I'll create a follow-up story that uses Rampage, Inc. again. :D