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Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2016 7:53 AM Title: Midsummer Night

One of the things I find most difficult to achieve in size fetish fiction is finding the right balance of description.  In "normal" fiction, it's usually better to slip visual/physical descriptions in subtly, sometimes minimally, avoiding bald reportage.  This is size fetish, however, and we're all here for the dramatic size difference, so we want those descriptions kept immediate.  But it's also possible to over-do it, both in letting the descriptions get in the way of the narrative as well as just repeating yourself.

You're one of the best I've read at getting this balance right.  Your giants are always startling when they speak, and they're always terrifying when they move.  The pace of your stories never drags, either, and the inner sufferings and cruelties have equal weight with the physical atrocities.  These vignettes are terrifically affecting.

I'm fairly convinced Hasiron restrains his subordinates from completely wiping the human Resistance out in order to keep their hopes alive until he can crush them personally.  As chattel, humans are at Hasiron's disposal, but it must be even more delicious when another Sisao, like Ateinia, gives him an excuse to use a rival in the same way.

Access to this masea stuff simply has to be the only political issue in the galaxy.



Author's Response:

Thank you! While my main purpose in writing size fetish stories is to explore the fetish aspects, I do try to keep things like pacing and description in mind. Character development can be the most challenging for me, especially when it comes to my giant/giantess characters. They are often satisfied with being evil monsters, so it can be difficult to make them complex (still, I give it my best shot).

And you’re correct, Hasiron keeps them alive just for his amusement. What else are you supposed to do for entertainment on a primitive planet in the middle of nowhere? ;)

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