Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2017 5:15 PM Title: Jubilee

giant couples are always fun, but I really enjoyed the world that you placed your devious pair in. I love that serai and dren are essentially stealing people from another dimension to murder - oh, and the hint there at the end of what they might do next had me spiraling off with all the possibilities! I'd love to read that by you.

serai and dren are a hot pair. power-obsessed, bloodthristy, remorseless killers. I really enjoyed reading all the terrible ways they toyed with their little city. the way you write even simple actions, like a stomp, or a finger coming down, always stirs the mind in the best way. the scale here was immense and wonderful. and I love how serai carves "mine" into the city. the last bit with them down in the city has holograms watching themselves as giants was really awesomely mind-bending too.

and there are so many little details here I loved as I read this one. like the idea that a tiny's mind might be too small a frame of reference to be able to process dren's giant form as handsome. that was really interesting to consider.

wonderful violence, vivid and lurid as always, with scenes that really showcase your imagination. it's always a pleasure reading stories by you, and this one had plenty of wicked action. I'll definitely be coming back to these scenes! :D

Author's Response:

I almost didn't post this story because I wasn't really happy with it. While I love nano and giga scenarios, they're difficult for me to write. This was sort of a practice exercise for me in that regard. I do like Serai and Dren, though (for the same reasons why you like them...because they are monsters and they glory in that fact). Maybe I'll write a follow-up in which they travel to Earth and do Bad Things. :D

Anyway, thank you for the kind words!