Reviews For Isabel's Journey
Reviewer: FierceAlchemist Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 9:43 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival
Date: April 25 2016 9:43 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival
I was just thinking that later on in the story they'd have some sexy time and he'd climb her boobs.
Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2016 10:32 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival
Date: April 24 2016 10:32 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival
If you ever want help with your writer's block let me know.
Reviewer: FierceAlchemist Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2016 9:34 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story! About the foreshadowing, what do you think it could be foreshadowing? Honestly, I had no foreshadowing in mind and I'd like to hear what you thought it might be.
Date: April 24 2016 9:34 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival
First review I've ever written for the site. I felt compelled because mega/micro gentle gts is my favorite genre and there isn't a lot of it out there. So thank you for writing this awesome story, I'm definitley a fan.
P.S. I hope that line about her "mountains" at the end of chapter 2 was foreshadowing.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story! About the foreshadowing, what do you think it could be foreshadowing? Honestly, I had no foreshadowing in mind and I'd like to hear what you thought it might be.
Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2016 6:41 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival
Author's Response: Three will definitely be time with her feet. As for the other stories, I'm having a bit of writers block with them and am having troubling advancing the plot. I might update them soon though.
Date: April 24 2016 6:41 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival
I hope he gets time with her feet also I hope you continue your other stories as well.
Author's Response: Three will definitely be time with her feet. As for the other stories, I'm having a bit of writers block with them and am having troubling advancing the plot. I might update them soon though.
Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2016 6:05 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival
Author's Response: My idea was around 7 or 8 miles.
Date: April 24 2016 6:05 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival
So how tall is she?
Author's Response: My idea was around 7 or 8 miles.
Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2016 11:04 AM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: April 24 2016 11:04 AM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival
Good start and good size.
Author's Response: Thanks!