Reviews For Isabel's Journey
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Reviewer: FierceAlchemist Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 9:43 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival

I was just thinking that later on in the story they'd have some sexy time and he'd climb her boobs.

Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2016 10:32 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival

If you ever want help with your writer's block let me know.

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Date: April 24 2016 9:34 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival

First review I've ever written for the site. I felt compelled because mega/micro gentle gts is my favorite genre and there isn't a lot of it out there. So thank you for writing this awesome story, I'm definitley a fan.

P.S. I hope that line about her "mountains" at the end of chapter 2 was foreshadowing.



Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story! About the foreshadowing, what do you think it could be foreshadowing? Honestly, I had no foreshadowing in mind and I'd like to hear what you thought it might be.

Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2016 6:41 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival

 I hope he gets time with her feet also I hope you continue your other stories as well.



Author's Response: Three will definitely be time with her feet. As for the other stories, I'm having a bit of writers block with them and am having troubling advancing the plot. I might update them soon though.

Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2016 6:05 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival

So how tall is she?



Author's Response: My idea was around 7 or 8 miles.

Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2016 11:04 AM Title: Act 1, Scene 1: Isabel's Arrival

Good start and good size.



Author's Response: Thanks!

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