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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2016 5:50 PM Title: Missed Rendezvous

So they're not walking around the neighbourhood looking for men. They going all over the world. Teleporting, perhaps? If so, this house could be anywhere in the world. It could be beyond Earth. If Josh looked out the window, or made it to the front door while it's open, what would he see?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2016 8:52 PM Title: Missed Rendezvous

Well, the good news is that Josh didn't reveal Julian's true location. If he did, the Faith may come to get him, and we all know we don't want that.

Hmm. So location around the world seems to have some importance in these woman collecting tiny men.

Cmon, Bohdi. That's all you remember. Can you please share some details of your entrapment next time?

The main issue is, I was expecting this to be Julian's chapter. I'm glad it's the next one, but wish it was this one. I have terrible patience.

My summer break is coming to a close soon. I really hope this one comes soon. I don't think I have been more anxious for a chapter this year.

I really, really, really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I wouldn't drag this out would i Tom? why, that would just be cruel...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2016 6:15 PM Title: Undiscovered Country

This is becoming a deconstruction of heroism. Josh is doing what would normally be the heroic thing, rescuing people and trying to help everyone escape, but Julian seems to have a more realistic grasp of the situation. They have no way to be restored right now without the girls, and so if they did escape, what would they do? Right now, Julian has a point about trying to enjoy the situation. This could, however, turn right around if Josh does find a way to escape.



Author's Response:

The inversion of traditional archetypes invites opportuntiy to exploore disparate morality given the nature of the situation and how the antecedent/behavior/consequence model is no longer abiding by the same parameters. Julilan is my pragmatist, while Josh is the idealist amnd Carver is struggling to define his role. Julian talks a big game but as a relaist he knows that there is a chasm between fantasy and the reality. We'll see how this continues to evolve with the introduction of another personality.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2016 10:25 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

I think we forget how sexy of a family this is.

We have Faith who is your traditional sexy girl who we have lusted over becuase she is simply hot.

Then there is the younger sister who has a sense of creativity and uses that make herself unique. While she herself is sexy too, it's what she does that makes her most interesting.

Then there is the mother. She hasn't done anything, but her control and dominance over her daughters and her tinies show that she truly is the queen that must be worshipped. She radiates power and she hasn't even played with a tiny yet. We know she is sexy because she used her body to lure Julian to her and is probably how she got her toys too.

I would love a backstory on how Mrs. May got her slave inside her panties. Maybe, she saw a person that looks similar to her husband and decided that he was the one to serve her. You know that she misses all that pleasure and she is experiencing it again with this lucky guy in her panties.

DW brings a great point. It could be the shrunk ray in the closet. In fact, we don't even know that a shrink ray exists, but this does make me wonder.

Julian also mentioned that Mrs. May might have a favorite. I think her little panty prisoner is that lucky slave. We can see that this guy is obedient since he stayed out when she commanded him. Also, she kept him inside her underwear the entire time except when she had to use the toilet.

Julie seems to get this from her mother about have panty prisoners. Julie just took it to a new level by mummifying her toys. Julie did it by force, Mrs. May probably seduced her toy instead.

If this was nighttime, I wonder if Julian will have a sleepover in Mrs. May's room. Will he get to see a special show with the prisoner? We know Julian might be a little jealous of this whole thing. Maybe, if she has to go to bed soon, she keeps this little man, all snug up close to her. Maybe she even ties him up so he cannot escape. If she does have a favorite, we know she won't let him go.

I'm hoping Mrs. May is kinky. Julian already suspected a bunch of sexy toys by her nightstand so I think Mrs. May has got a few tricks up her sleeve to keep her tiny obedient.

Personally, I also think this mom is freaking sexy and she is even keeping her little man in my favorite spot, her panties! Oh, what I would do to take his place.

I would volunteer to her toy. I know I say this about most giantesses that I read on this site, but this woman just seems like a dream come true. She likes to be sexy, naughty and even be in control. I can't stop thinking about this chapter.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2016 9:06 PM Title: Undiscovered Country

The mother is HOT!  Keeping someone prisoner in her panty, possibly keeping her tinies in a hanging birdcage (always love that scenario).

I guess the mother could kick off her shoes, revealing one or two tinies wrapped around her little toes as living, decorative toe rings.  Or perhaps Julian will get to see her pull something with someone(s) attached from that nightstand. 

It would be great if Julian gets caught by the mother; but he probably still has a role to play with Faith's little butthole doesn't he.

Sounds like some strange device is in the closet, perhaps the annimated shrink ray exists! Let's hope it's too big for tinies to operate.  Then again, it could be the mother's collection of "shoeboxes"!!!



Author's Response:

She is very hot. more on her soooooon

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2016 5:37 PM Title: Undiscovered Country

Keep going with this!

Yes! This is awesome! She keeps a tiny in the front of her panties and it seems that she keeps him there all the time! I want to be that guy so bad!

I bet Julian envies that guy too. He was right. It looks like Mrs. May does have a favorite from the looks of it. I never even suspected a guy was with her until she was in the bathroom. She just went on with her business as the tiny was pleasuring her. Amazing!

Will Julian get a front row seat of Mrs. May having some fun? I would totally watch that and forget about Josh. This is a rare opportunity and I bet Julian also agrees with me and believes that this is worth it.

One thing that I would've done which may not be smart was to get her attention. I know that leads to trouble, but I can't resist this kind of stuff. You see a hot woman keep a tiny in her panties, and I'm thinking, "I wish that was me".

Smart move by Julian by waiting. Right now he is still scouting the area and is scouting Mrs. May out. He wants to know what kind of giantess she is and if she is naughty and sexy, I bet Julian wouldn't resist either. After see what Julie does with her tinies, I bet Mrs. May seems like heaven.

I think this chapter right here is my favorite chapter of this story. The suspense, and reveals and the surprises all interest me and kept me anxious to know more. In fact, I think I'm more excited about this story than Tom's story right now. These last few chapters have been mindblowing and I'm just drooling over this giantess.

If though Mrs. May didn't do much yet, I still desire her more than most giantess on this site. Isn't that crazy? This woman is a game changer and I'm super excited to see what happens next!

(Please continue Julian's adventure. Josh can wait. He already fucked up Julie's room. Now Julian should get rewarded.)

I really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2016 4:15 PM Title: Black Ops

The most important thing that I read was the end notes. Haha! That adventure is something that I have been looking forward to for a long time.

We know that Julian's arguement was just a load of bs and was just a way of using logic to convince Josh to let him go. Julian outsmarted Josh here and I approve of it. Might have to thank Josh for this adventure Julian is about to go on.

Back to Julie's room. This girl is even crazier than Janine from Tom's story! I mean, this girl is straight up cruel. The bound man in her panties was undeniably sexy, but using a nail clipper to cut limbs, and use their skulls as jewelry?!! Amazingly creatively cruel! It made Josh go back into the hall to look for Julian. That's how bad it was.

It's funny, I thought Julie was going to be the sexy aggressive giantess that I was looking forward to, but wow, she took it up a few notches and showed us that she might be on of the worst giantesses in history to be a pet for.

On the other hand, we are about to see what Ms. May is. I'm still wondering about her first name. I think that is something that I will be looking forward to. Also, the tidiness of her room will show a lot too. I suspect that she will be the opposite of Julie and be super clean. Everything ship shape.

I'm still rooting for my idea of Ms. May having herself her own personal tiny named Tom. Now wouldn't that be something.

There is a reason why there is no trace of Julian. I don't think Julian got caught becuase I don't think Ms. May is in the house. It would be weird if Faith was dropping two tinies by a door opposite of her mom's room.

I hope Ms. May is naughty. I'm thinking of Miss Harwood naughty. Maybe even sexier than that, but it is hard to beat Harwood sexy.

Did Julian find some jackpot? Underwear drawer? Did he crawl in her bed? Is he in her bathroom? Did he tie himself up to her chair? Is he in the corner just waiting for Ms. May to come home? Does Ms. May have some traps for tinies?

I still can't get over that scene where Ms. May was controlling the situation in Faith's room. The way she was in charge, hands on hips, showing authority, clothes tight enough to outline her womanly body. I'm just picturing a tiny down in those panties as she was in Faith's room. I bet a tiny worships her and this makes her feel like a goddess around the house.

Ooohhh! I really, really, really, really, can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 5:20 PM Title: The New Guy

Julian's favorite punchline: "I don't have to run faster than the bear, I just have to run faster than you."

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 5:13 PM Title: The New Guy

So Faith likes this guy. Will she like him to the point that she will care for him like a giantess nurse? Will she care for him more than the others?

I think that since she will be alone with him will be even more interesting when Josh and Julian return. I wonder what state would the man be in then.

Well, I guess they are not returning him to Julie's room. That must make her mad since that guy might be one of her favorite pets. Not every guy is a cutie and I bet there will some consequence for that.

Julian, just abort the mission and go straight to Mom's room. I mean, we can clearly see that his mind is focused on her, rather than Julie's room. I think it's time he makes a visit. These teases are killing me.

So much for Faith wrapping Josh up. That would've been a fun idea but I guess that can't happen since we can't afford Julie to break the main character's legs!

I bet the next chapter will just be Josh finding more guys to rescue. Soon, Faith will have a big collection and Josh and Julian are like her explorers.

Well, now Julian got into Josh's head so I guess he won't be rescuing every guy now. Looks like we can see what happens when they leave a guy for Julie.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2016 12:02 PM Title: Operation Jap Julie

And just what will they do with that guy? Taking him to Faith isn't a good idea; he may get eaten. He may last longer with Julie.

And I'd like to see Winston's fate mentioned at some point.



Author's Response:

It does seem to be a bit of a gamble for our little explorers. I haven't forgotten about winston...:)

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2016 8:20 PM Title: Search and Rescue

Josh took one heck of a chance rescuing someone when it could easily alert Julie something is amiss.  Hopefully Julie has lots and lots of replacements.  Guess we shall see.

It would be nice if Faith kept the rescued man in the tape, washed him off, replaced the tape over his mouth so he can only breath through his nose, then dropped him either in the front or back of her panty.  Of course Josh will complain; but Faith can tell him any future rescued victims she'll give honest consideration to for better treatment in their terrarium, for now she feels like using this guy to indirectly get back at her sister Julie.

Seems to be only a matter of time before Julian runs off and surrenders himself to Faith's mom.  Perhaps he could sneak into her room while she is sleeping, climb in the sheets with her and pleasure her to a wet dream.  Would she wake up and find him, maybe even the next morning all cuddled up nice and warm in her pussy.  It would make for a heck of a conversation between the two.  Or maybe Julian would slink back to Faith's room, leaving the mother for another night, and another.



Author's Response:

We shall see how the rescue is received by Faith. Lol I think you have pegged Julians character. We shall see

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2016 6:13 PM Title: Search and Rescue

Holy shit! This guy was mummified! And I thought my idea was cruel. This guy couldn't move, speak, hear, taste, or even see! All his sense were blocked by the tape!

Josh, you do realize that this is a big mistake. Why da fuck would you take this man? There is no code of honor where you got to help everyone. Julian has a point. The dude has to be left there. It jeapordize as the mission!

Well, fuck you Josh. First, you decide to take the guy and now you won't let Julian go into mom's room? Pfft. If I was Julian, I'm sprinting into that room and never coming back out.

Julie has some sexy torture ideas. I mean, this is also like a fantasy of mine. Just being helpless, all tied up in some panties awaiting for a giantes to use me all day and there is nothing I can do about it. I wonder if the mother has similar ideas. I hope she is naughty too.

Well, Faith is not going to be happy about this. I bet this was her secret mission against Julie and now Josh messed up. You know what I would do if I was Faith. I would free the new guy, tape up Josh, stick him back in the panties and let Julie fuck the shit out of him as punishment. Julie wouldn't know the difference.

Lots of good stuff this chapter. I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

I figured you wouldn't approve of Josh reining Julian in. It would be funny if Faith swapped them out...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2016 6:04 AM Title: Operation Jap Julie

"You better hope it doesn’t get into my room, because you know what I’ll do if I find there,” she said, grinning evilly.

Faith rolled her eyes, “I know,” she said.

“I don’t know why you keep them around for days at a time, that’s just stupid,” Julie remarked.

“What I do is my business,” Faith said. “Don’t you have somewhere else to go or was the whole point of your trip up the stairs to pester me?”

Shaking her head, Julie climbed the last two stairs and pushed by the other two girls. “I’m going to my room, see if maybe there is something hiding there,” she stated, grin at the corner of her mouth.

 

Now we find out what this means I'm also wondering if they'll take the guy back to screw with Julie, or if Julie shows up and offers a counterproposal.



Author's Response:

We have only gotten a glimpse of Julies affinity for brutality though more will be revealed in the next handful of chapters both through direct observation as well as anecdotally. There a few different ways for this this to unfold :)

Reviewer: AprilJoinerWeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 9:41 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Definitely one of Julie's playthings. It could be one that just barely survived the last "session" with Julie. I agree with Tom. They should be forced to decide between helping it or leaving it. They should choose to leave it, inflicting guilt and a reminder to the duo.

Author's Response:

Very astute analysis of what is to come. The next chapter addresses it soon enough ;)

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 8:06 PM Title: Operation Jap Julie

Nice!  Very nice indeed!  Sounds like someone's prisoner in Julie's workout panty.  Front? Back? Perhaps one each?  Heck, who says all her panties don't have a tiny or more sewn permanantly into them.  That is, assuming that's what's moving.  I'm kinda getting ahead of the story.

 

A pile of used gym socks, sounds like a tinytown.  How many tinies can be captive in her socks, the discarded shoes or anywhere else in her room.  Does Julie even eat her tinies, or keep them alive surviving on her sweat, dead skin, toe jam and her other bodily goodies?

 

Makes one wonder if the mother, with the large breasts, actually eats all her tinies or keeps them safely “close by” her.



Author's Response:

Unexplored territory.  Who knows what things the two are yet to find? 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 6:44 PM Title: Operation Jap Julie

Another little guy!

We knew that Julie and Mrs. May know about tinies in general, so I'm not surprised if they both have one.

I think this guy is tied up to Julie's panties. That's why he can't get out from the panties. Also, I bet that she gagged him too, and that's why he couldn't say anything.

I wonder who this guy is, and if he is the only one in Julie's room. It's going to be strange, becuase if Josh and Julian free this guy, then Julie will be suspicious. Yeah, they gotta leave this guy alone.

They should leave this guy alone and wait for Julie to play with him. I bet Julian would love a show and both Julian and Josh can learn about what kind of giantess is Julie.

This story just got a lot more interesting and fun. I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I think it is fairly obvious to the readers what Josh and Julian have stumbled actoss even if they don't know yet. Having tried to portray Josh throughout the story as a morally conscious person it would be hard for him to do nothing while another suffers be a use of his omission of action. Julian not so much though he has seemed to have bonded with Josh fairly significantly despite their disparate moral compasses.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 6:01 PM Title: Operation Jap Julie

My room's really dirty (I hide under the covers and pretend it doesn't exist) so I'm gonna say it's either A.) a wasp B.) a mouse or C.) another tiny dude. I mean, obviously it's not a spider, where'd the fun be if they were right?



Author's Response:

A spider would be terrifying but you're right not much fun. A wasp would sick too because where there's one usually there's lots more. A pet mouse wouldn't have survived Julie though a wild one would be interesting. I think it's pretty easy to imagine our duo have found another unfortunate person in this dirty girl's soiled panties. That being said, do they liberate him or leave him and the morale implications of both? BTW you should clean up your room who knows what you might find :P

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2016 10:03 PM Title: Relocated, Regrouped, and Ready

Oh SON OF A B&%$^!!!  Again!  I write out a bunch of comments, saved them to copy and the site both told me my comments could not be posted and deleted my copy.  

FIX THIS SITE!

Great story as usual.

Not to go over all the different torture scenarios I wrote out, AGAIN; but wouldn't it be interesting if Josh and Julian find tinies Julie is torturing in her room.  More erotic-perverse than bone breaking devices.  A few tinies locked in gibbets dangling from Julie's toilet seat into the bowl below.  Tinies being sewn into the gossets of Julie's panites.  Female tinies locked in a circular stockade where the head of one woman is in the crotch (or ass crack) of the next, and so on to complete a full circle.

You know, weird stuff like that. (I can't believe all I wrote out was lost, again darn it, after I copied it too).  Bare in mind, if Josh or Julian help or release any of Julie's tinies, then their plans are blown and their cozy accomodations are lost.  So it's pretty much leave the others to suffer Julie's tortures.

Is Cadence ever going to get her fun with Carver?  Perhaps make him her buttplug, or even her all out suppository.



Author's Response:

Hi DW sorry the site has been messing with your ability to review. I appreciate you taking the time to resubmit. Helping tinies does open a whole new can of worms for our little saboteurs and we will visit this topic again soon. Cadence is by no means done with Carver and don't think she hasn't forgotten Julian s insulting and condescending banter.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2016 5:57 PM Title: Relocated, Regrouped, and Ready

This chapter is just giving me hype for the next few. I love this setup, the planning and using an alarm clock for time.

Part of me wishes that Fiath didn't ask about when they were done, becuase then we can see what Josh and Julian would've done in their free time.

This little trip seems to be the main focus of the story so far. I mean, ever since the proposal chapter, this story has revolved about this charade that Julian came up with.

I just hate this feeling that something will go wrong on this expedition. Like Julie arriving him early. I think that's the biggest problem.

Otherwise, I think this mission is ready to start.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yep it's a prep chapter. Would I throw a monkey wrench into the plans? Me? Guess we shall see Muwahaha...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2016 5:31 PM Title: Groping Around in the Dark

I agree, this was a funny chapter. The benter with Josh and Julian is great.



Author's Response:

I think even in the face of tribulation levity is a tool to keep people from going mad. Plus it's fun to write :)

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