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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2016 1:13 PM Title: The Killing Field

Ok. I'm now assuming that you are saving the best for last. After Julie's multi chapter segment, then it's Mrs. May's turn. (I hope.)

I'm sure Josh and Julian could hide until Faith returns. Only problem is that Faith would have to admit that she was trying to sabotage her sister's room.

Perhaps there are little vents in Julie's room that connect to Fiath's room, or better yet, Mrs. May's room. :)

Like I said in a previous review, Julie is not a giantess that I would reveal myself to. Not the sexy giantess I had once thought. Of course, what she did to Bodhi was super hot, but I doubt she would do the same for Josh and Julian.

Hmm. Otherwise I don't see a way of escape for these 2 men. Unless Mrs. May knocks on Julie's door and "saves" them. It must be foreshadowing that Julian was talking about Mrs. May's control in the house this chapter.

My prediction is that Julie spots Josh and catches him. Julian however doesn't do anything to save Josh, making Josh question the integrity of Julian as a friend. Julian then uses Josh as a distraction to run off to Mrs. May's room.

Probably the first prediction that I hope is not the case. I want both of them to escape, but I'm afraid this is not true. Hopefully, it will still be entertaining, nonetheless.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

We shall see whether Josh and Julian can outlast julie as she attempts to find them. I certainly wouldn’t want to be in her clutches either. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2016 5:57 PM Title: Carver's Grand Adventure

Lol, wtf Duggernaut. This chapter hit me hard. I guess I'm another Carver. I'm a peeper too. I go online to sites like giantess world and read stories about these beautiful girls but don't have the guts to ask any of the pretty ladies outside my room. I just assume that they all have boyfriends. I fear rejection and when I talk to them, I avoid the subject of relationships.

However, I do envy Carver's position. 3 some with these ladies would be amazing. Similar to what Josh already experienced.

Next chapter, I hope Julian finally goes to Mrs. May's room. I'm so anxious and getting tired of waiting. Last thing I want is you saying you hit another wall and the Mrs. May scene hasn't been written yet.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the insight my friend. I think trying to understand this fascination and fear of recrimination from others makes it kind of taboo. How do you spring it on a girlfriend? I know you are waiting for Mrs. May but I haven't completed this p[ortion of my story arc for the moment. Apologies. No wall here yet though. :)

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2016 1:59 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

....FUCK....  "*.*"



Author's Response:

Quite possibly, it does have a very ominous feel. 

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2016 5:18 PM Title: Subterfuge

Nice work in adding to the sisterly-love between the characters. Seriously, the cookie teasing was well put together and really helped color the sister's love/hate bond in a stronger light :D

 

Also looking forward to the next chapter. My fingers are crossed that Carver will at least find someway to enjoy whats coming to him. The first step's always gonna be the hardest right? ^_^;



Author's Response:

Thanks, trying to show a broader depth of character and establish the nature of the relationship. I hope you found the next chapter chapter up to snuff regarding Carver. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2016 10:54 PM Title: Subterfuge

Now, we talking!

The reunion with Mrs. May will soon be ours, my friends. Together, we will guide Julian through the scary hallway and into the room of heaven. Until, we will be patiently waiting for his arrival.

You know. At first, I thought Julie's part was actually some random thing just to delay Julian's next journey. In fact, it was the exact opposite and I have to thank you Duggernaut. Mrs. May might be closer than we think. I just hope it's not some tease like the first time. (I will always remember that.)

Now then, back to Carver fun with Candence. Maybe he will "carve her". Get it? Ok, I give up.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2016 9:14 PM Title: Subterfuge

I kinda agree with Alman, perhaps Carver and Cadence might find that they both enjoy Carver being in Cadence's panty, worshipping and falling deeply in love with her p_ssy.  I did want him up Cadence's asshole, now I'm not sure which idea I like better.  Perhaps once inside, Carver wil fall in love with Cadence's asshole?

 

What ever happens, may Mrs. May find Julian and keep him, perhaps Mrs. May would prefer two tinies living in her panty permanantly, she has the lesbian lady already.

 

Now now, what is Julie going to do with Julian?  A living toe ring?  A full sized spanking on his tiny rear?  Kept in a jar and peed on?  Swallowed then thrown up?

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2016 4:32 PM Title: People in Glass Houses

Great bunch of chapters :D
Though they're individually short, your speedy updates mean that I need wait only a week or so to enjoy a good cluster of reading material ^_^

Gotta say, while Josh and Julian are probably the main tiny heroes of this tale, I do still find myself siding a lot with Carver.
I'm just hoping that the guy still manages to catch a break with what is to come, he's way too likeable and sympathetic. I hope he comes to enjoy his shrunken situation as Candace's potential favorite ^_^; 

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2016 10:51 PM Title: People in Glass Houses

If Julian gets taken out of Cadence's asshole this soon, especially if he had a straw to let him stay up there indefinitely, I hope Carver at long last finally goes up Cadence's asshole in his place; and stays there.

Well if Josh and Julian do go back in Julie's room, then wouldn't it be quite possible for Julian to return to Mrs. Mays room rather than Faith's and get caught by the mother?

With Julian in the mother's, uh-hum, clutches (no way she'll let him go, nor would he leave her) and Carver now hopefully living full time in Cadence's asshole (fingers crossed), that leaves Josh, Bohdi and whomever Josh rescues from Julie's room (assuming Julie doesn't catch them, after all Julian hasn't been up Julie's asshole yet, he he he) 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2016 6:40 PM Title: People in Glass Houses

Wait, how much more of this Julie stuff is going to go on? I'm super eager for Mrs. May to find a tiny and keep them for a few chapters.

I thought after Faith and Candence were done playing, it will be time. Now Julie gets this whole dilemma to be put in here?

While Julie is pretty creative on how to torture her tinies, it's not as exciting or erotic as the others. Too much of her and this story becomes a horror giantess clip.

Also, Josh and Julian back in Julie's room? Why them? Also, Julian was just in her ass. He is already being freed? Well the good news is that he is closer Mrs. May's room now. :)

Man, Julie just had to ruin this moment. Well, I guess she is letting the story move along which is good. I like how she wants action constantly.

Hopefully Julie doesn't capture Julian. We need him to sneak off into the door accross the hall. If Josh gets captured, oh well. He will distract Julie while Julian sneaks off. Perfect.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2016 10:53 PM Title: Humbling Pie

I never understood why the straw, or breathing tube concept isn't more widely used when someone is living up inside a woman's butt.  Those really thin straws you get with a pint of milk or a juice drink are ideal, small enough that it shouldn't bother the woman and small enough to keep the one inside from getting TOO MUCH outside air or escaping through it.

Let's hope Candence realizes there's no need to take Julian out, at least anytime soon.

It would be nice if Josh begins to long to go back in Faith's panty, finally admitting he truly enjoys being her panty prisoner.

As always, keep up the great work.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2016 4:57 PM Title: Humbling Pie

Never thought a straw could be that useful. It's bendable yet a bit sturdy. It's also hollow and can allow air to pass. Brilliant!

"Get him in there good and deep". I love it when girls talk dirty. Especially when they say things they are about to do and this is one example.

"People in glass houses". What? You mean the glass aquarium? Or is this some riddle to some other thing? Still, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2016 6:35 PM Title: The Red Room

Probably the first giantess in your stories that I absolutely would not want to be a pet for. A bit too cruel for my taste.

Um, I don't think Josh or Julian will return to Julie's room again. Sure, they didn't sabotage it yet, but it seems like Faith won't be sending them back any time soon. Faith is busy playing with Candence.

I'm more excited about Mrs. May making a return and keeping Julian as a pet. These teases are teasing the tease out of me.

I'm still crossing my fingers that Mrs. May has a tiny in her room named Tom that she decides to play with. Maybe, we could have a chapter about Mrs. May like how there was this chapter about Julie.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Julie is not a nice giantess. We'll have to wait and see whether or not Julian gets back to Mrs May's room or winds up fighting for his life in julie s 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2016 6:27 PM Title: Carver's Reprieve, Julian Cool as Ice

I thought Mrs. May was going to take Julian this chapter. Interesting to see Candence take him instead.

Ever woke up from a nightmare? Yeah, Carver just woke up and slept back to a dream come true.

Next chapter about Julie? Seems a bit random, but ok. I wonder what wil happen next.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

You were hoping it was this chapter :) the next chapter will make sense and not be as random as you think ;)

Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2016 8:15 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Like Feyd-Rautha Harkonnen in Dune, I wish Duggernaut would say about Julian....

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNqpdggBfgY



Author's Response:

My response to that would be michael Wincott's dialogue at 1:27

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gDwlbuyDPfk

:)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2016 4:42 PM Title: The Golden Rule

This patience game is annoying me. Like Julian, I just want more interaction with Mrs. May. No more games, just sex. Put them in a room together and let the fun begin. All this reading tension is driving me nuts!

That's all I was thinking this chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2016 1:30 PM Title: The Golden Rule

Julian may or may not be the first tiny that Mrs. May has encountered who was aroused by her despite their predicament, but she clearly recognizes his need and I expect she will enjoy denying him.  If he ever manages to bust his nut in her proximity, I expect it will be at the climax (heh) of the story.

Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2016 7:41 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

I don't have a major problem keeping Julian as long as something shitty happens to him.

Having to read the antics of this asshole....  When I imagine being imprisoned with such a dick, it's like being raped with a flail enema.

 

A flail



Author's Response:

I think being imprisoned in someone's ass, not matter achingly cute would constiutue a shitty situation, just saying :)

Reviewer: AprilJoinerWeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 12:28 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Julian is a very interesting character, I'm with TomSpeedy, I think killing him is a bit harsh. This isn't a pack of hyenas. The Julian character is supposed to inflict these types of emotions you're feeling. It makes the story much more dynamic. Will Julian escape unscathed? Probably not :) and that is why I'm super excited for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

You're right, Julian is chaotic, lewd, uncouth, and unfiltered. He was designed and written to be antagonist. He says what he feels, and fuck the consequences. The great karmic wheel may have something yet in store for him.

Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 8:18 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

He's a douche. This is reality....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QwnUrmA8Nbw
Gork, the hyena queen, has been a total douche and threatening the existence of her clan with her selfish behavior. The others take out You can watch around 19:00 minutes. By 22:00, Gork is maimed and by 25 minutes, we see what happens. This is mammalian behavior in a social order and that includes humans.

Upon Bohdi's healing, together, we would have killed Julian.

Author's Response:

Things may change given the fact Faith is not acquiring more tinies on a regular basis and who can say how Julian will be tolerated over a longer period of time before someone attempts to put him in his place. Maybe they could just freeze him out...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 8:12 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

@vxrx,

Kill Julian? That might be a bit too far.

I see the torture that he receives is a punishment for him being so cocky. Faith putting him in the toilet, in her butt. Not to mention what Mrs. May will do to him.

Julian's personality is what makes him unique. While Josh, Carver and Bodhi are concerned for the group's well being, Julian offers insight that only someone as selfish as he can see.

Remember when they rescued Bodhi? Josh realized that Julian was right and they probably should have left him. Faith said that Bodhi was a cutie and that makes Josh and Julian more expendable.

Have you considered that since Julian was stuck being Faith's toy the longest that he now has been affected to the point of pure survival instincts and his prolonged confinement has left him angry at the only ones he can and that are the other prisoners?

My point is we don't know Julian's whole story and he may have been changed by this whole experience of being shrunk. Julian is probably desperate to be restored and is probably considering death as a possibility since he knows that his life sucks.

We can see through Josh that Julian is stubborn and argues a lot, but from what I see, Julian survived all this time so his decisions should be considered.

Not to mention there was one chapter that was ridiculously funny becuase of Julian. He is important becuase he is different. His "alpha male" behavior is probably what kept him alive.

In a world where death can happen at any moment and you are held hostage by a giantess family, it's a game of survival. It's sexy and deadly, but Julian knows how to play this game, regardless of what he does or says, he is alive and he should not be killed.

Author's Response:

There seems to be a grain of truth in the things Julian says, though his method of delivery is certainly not conducive to relationship building. Julian is more of an 'OMEGA' male, while Josh fits the more tradition archetype of alpha. Besides, we know you just want to see Mrs. May have her way with him, :)

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