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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2016 4:32 PM Title: Taking Matter Into Your Own Hands

For some reason, despite the lack of giantess content, I truly enjoyed this chapter.

The discussion between Josh and Julian is important and entertaining to listen to. It even made me think of what they can do next.

Josh and Julian seek freedom and in this chapter, they explained that the mother is not an option anymore becuase in the last chapter, she showed how losing a tiny deserves punishment, so we know that Faith's mom will be very reluctant to let them go.

They considered the sister Julie and I don't think they want to go to her either.

Since these guys don't seem to have a destination, maybe the destination has to find them and that's what it looks like what will happen next chapter.

I think it's Julie that finds them. It could be Faith and Candence since they said that they have to check the dresser, but I just don't see them finding them again. And if they do, what will they do to Josh and Julian? Put them both in the toilet? I doubt it. It would be the 2nd time they find them, so I don't see it happening. Must be a new character.

Just for fantasy, if I'm in their position, I would let myself become a personal pet for the mother and she can keep me as long as she wants. Of course, if I was really shrunk down and fighting for survival, I probably would rather avoid any giantess.

I'm so excited about the next chapter! Looks like giantess content next! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I wanted to show some character interaction away from the run for life stuff. I think the bonding is important especially with what's coming.,,

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2016 11:10 AM Title: Taking Matter Into Your Own Hands

it was liable to get them both caught and likely back into the bowel

Now we're talkin...

Also: "Render unto Caesar" makes a great pick-up line.



Author's Response:

Talk about a Freudian slip, thanks for the snag. I honestly did consider the 'Render unto Caesar" line. I may even go back to add it. Thanks for the read and review!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2016 9:36 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Hmm. For the tinies getting dispersed, how about Candence decides to play with Henry and Carver. She takes them both out and Faith reminds her to watch over both of them. Candence nonchalantly says yes, but she is just staring at Carver. She sets them both on the bed and then picks up Carver. She plays with him to a point that she forgrts about Henry. Henry can't decide whether to get back in the box, stay put, or escape. He looks at Carver, being licked and played with and he decides to escape. He slides down the bed, and makes a run for the bedroom door. No one fixed the messy tunnel since Faith's mom opened the door so Henry just slips underneath and is in the hallway. Then, all of a sudden, Faith's mom shows up! (That's one idea.)

Or, maybe, there's a 5th tiny named Tom and he is actually stuck in Mrs. May's panty drawer ready to be played with. I bet that's why Mrs. May didn't demand Faith's tinies, becuase she already has one of her own. The perfect plot twist!

Or we can just go from the last chapter and Julian and Josh just follow Faith's mom out the door and they are home free (for some time) before the girls look for them. Then, as the girls go in search Josh and Julian, Fiath's sister, Julie sneaks in and takes the tinies out of the box and takes them to her room.

I hope it's option 2. :)

Author's Response:

I'm about to shift gear now that Mom has said no new tinies. I think you might like it. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2016 6:22 PM Title: Girls/Boys

What a twist! Faith's mom just shows up and demonstrates her dominance! Ha! If there is a 50/50 for a tiny, I bet she wins all the time.

I love her controlling demeanor! She shows that she is in charge and that she gets what she wants, I love it.

Yay, she is taller, has nicely shaped hips, and good size breasts. I'm glad you kept on giving her body descriptions. Also, I like the brown hair too. Hoping she changes to yoga pants soon. I think she would love to show off her body. (I still don't know her name.)

Wow! When she said that there will be no more playthings, I thought that Mrs. May was going to take the tinies with her. That's what I wished had happened, but I think that would be too strong of a plot twist to have all the tinies wind up with her.

At first, I wondered what was the point of forbidding more tinies, and now I realized that it means that no more killing on purpose. That's a great sign for the tinies.

Haha, Julian likes her just like me. Then again, he seems to like every female so far. But I love how you mentioned that he prefers experienced women. That's exactly how I feel! I look at all these stories on this site and most of these ages are very young. (Yes, I think teen girls are young.) I find the women more attractive when they are a bit older and Julian has a good idea of what I'm talking about.

Most of the other readers seem to like Julian the most. I'm not sure if they may enjoy it if he ends up with Faith's mom. (Personally, I don't care who ends up with Faith's mom.) I just think that the other readers will like the Julian/Faith matchup. But let's see, shall we.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yep, Faith's mom shows up and lays the hammer down, there is no dispute who is in charge in that household. It does appear to bode well for the tinies if the girls are not allowed to replenish their supplies easily. We get a glimpse of julian's character a little more next chapter when he shares some of his views on the situation. I honestly don't know yet how the little guys are going to be dispersed, though I do think there may very well be a carver/girls chapter. We'll see. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2016 8:05 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

I noticed that you didn't reply to my review which made me wonder if you read it. (Not the one where I replied to Apriljoinerweb, but the one abou the chapter.)

Author's Response:

My apologies Tom, yes i read it but got sidetracked and forgot to get back to it. As always I am extremely grateful for yours and other reviews, they help provide the impetus and motivation to continue writing. For you, the mother in this story will be taller, ;)

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2016 10:55 PM Title: This Flight Tonight

Alright, it's been a long story but I can't really remember if it was stated exactly why all the girls are super nonchalant about tiny kidnapped men. Is this a common occurance? A power imabalance? Something that happens far and wide in society, or is just confined to this one household?



Author's Response:

I have tried to convey the men have no clue what the hell is going on or that there even awareness this type of thing can happen. There was mention of another friend who had found a little something so it is close circle with knowledge and penchant for taking things to play with.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2016 10:23 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

@AprilJoinerWeb,

You want Tom, the only shrunken dude in Tom's story (besides his grandpa) to break a body part?!!

That will be no fun if everyone giantess has to worry about that broken limb.

I can see it might happen in this story, but a broken toy is no toy at all in my book.

Author's Response:

Tom is in enough of a bind at the moment don't panic :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2016 5:52 PM Title: This Flight Tonight

Wow, chapter titles are nice. I agree, they do help.

Yes, the escape is soon. Let's see the other giantesses of the house. Now, Josh considered the mother. I think that Josh would be more fun to be captured by the mother than Julian.

Julian is just going to enjoy all the stuff and it will be repetitive to your other stories. I think people might want to see Julian punished. Julian asked for ass, and that crazy sister seems like his demise.

I noticed that you only have 3 stories going on at the moment. Maybe you could finish "Mo's story." I'm still wondering if Miss Mackenzie gets him!

I hope the mom is taller than everyone in the house. I can feel her presence even though I don't even know her yet! I hope she is similar to Miss Harwood. Love her!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I am currently reworking Mo's. Julian talks a good game...

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2016 4:24 PM Title: Julian/Faith & Cadence

Epic chapter as usual mate! 
I especially liked how this one included sections of both team's actions. Almost felt like a double post rolled into one! :)


And it's exciting to see that the girls are finally getting round to playing... I sure hope that Carver gets a good long run though. While he's evidently not one of the main protagonists of this game, he's a nice guy. It's just too bad he doesn't have as much courage or confidence as the other two, ya know?

 
Hopefully his cute charm will inspire Candace to keep him around long enough :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and review. Yeah it was kind of a double too short to throw out by itself so I put them together. As I mentioned in another review I'm toying with direction which may play into Carvers favor. Not sure yet. As for courage maybe Carver just has more to live for... 

Reviewer: Bug Lover Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2016 10:44 AM Title: Julian/Faith & Cadence

Damn the  snitch Carver won't feel sorry for him when he dies now. Well I will but not as much.



Author's Response:

Lol that put a smile on my face. I am wrestling with a twist that might buy Carver some time. We'll see. Regardless if the others are caught and Henry squeas on him could be prison justice in the box. Snitches get stitches and finks get shrinks. Wait they're already small...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2016 9:41 PM Title: Julian/Faith & Cadence

So now Faith has a sister named Julie. Ok, Julie, Julian, Julie, Julian. Man, that's going to be confusing.

I hope the mom has a nice name, maybe one from my list that I put in a review. I can't wait to meet her!

I like how Faith mentioned that if a tiny got into any of their rooms, there is no way to get them back. That means that both Julie and their mom would be obsessed with a tiny. Julie seems evil, and I'm guessing mom is super horny. Seems about right.

Wow, Carver! You just blew Josh's cover! And I bet Josh heard that! No more saving Carver I guess. He backstabbed Josh, something I thought Julian was going to do.

So there are 4 women and 4 tiny men. Interesting to see a 1 to 1 ratio. Let's play matching! Remember this game, Duggernaut?

Candence gets Carver
Faith gets Julian
Julie gets Josh
Mom gets Henry

This one was tough, especially the last 2. I figured that since Josh is much independent, that he can last against Julie. I think little Henry doesn't stand a chance with Julie. He may stand a chance with Mom and I think he will be afraid of Mom which I want to see.

I just noticed something. Julie spotted the towel. I bet she will open up a lower corner to give the tinies a chance to get into the hall. What a twist that can be!

One thing I almost forgot. You mentioned the height of Faith and Julie. I was hoping that this time, maybe Faith's mom is taller than Faith.

Story is getting interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Faith's mom will make a cameo soon. I have decided on a name from your list. You'll see :)

Reviewer: JDO Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 12:22 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Josh to the rescue! It's gonna take something drastic to get rid of Julian, seems like. Hopefully the rescue attempt works and they can get somewhere safe in a hurry.



Author's Response:

Lol For now Julian is using up every last iota of luck he possesses. The real question here is there really any place safe at their size?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2016 10:28 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Hmm, a name for her. I was thinking about a short name becuase I bet I will be using her name in my reviews a lot. My preferences are the first few names, but any would be cool.

Mary, Wendy, Lisa, Debra, Lia, Carla, Rachel, (queen) Margery, Sadie, Maya, Grace, Jennifer, Julia, Julie, Kali, Karen, Kim, Lara, Maggie, Stacy.

Those are the names that I think are short and sexy to me. Other names that are not in her are becuase either I know the person in real life, or I have heard the name in some other story.

Of all those names, I hope you choose one from the first 5: Mary, Wendy, Lisa, Debra, Lia. If not you can choose the others. (Margery was just a joke.) Also, my preference is first few names to last few throughout the whole list. But honestly, they are all good.

Author's Response:

Mary

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2016 6:38 PM Title: Parkour Josh

Aw. I was hoping you made several chapters like you did with your other stories. I read this one last so I guess it felt short after reading the conclusions to the other stories.

If I was Josh, forget Julian, let him stand in her piss. I would leave him. Besides, it was Julian who let the girls know that Josh was in the stuffed orca.

I think it is time for little Henry to escape. Or maybe Faith let's him escape. Then a new character can find him. I know that won't happen soon, but I can't help but wonder!

I really, really, really, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Sorry Tom. Julian is just way too much fun to leave stewing in Faith's toilet. As for Henry he has had multiple opportunities to escape and chose not to, essentially a house mouse so it would be out of character for him to try now. Even knowing Ham's fate couldn't shoehorn him out so I have a suspicion his days are certainly numbered. I'm going to need a name for Faith's mom....

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2016 3:16 PM Title: Splashdown

Just read the story and I love it. I couldn't spot any spelling/grammar mistakes. As for the theme and genres they are some of my favorites. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. I hope you keep writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading this tale and sharing a review. I will do my utmost to keep spinning this yarn as long as there are people who want to read it :)

Reviewer: Bug Lover Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2016 12:22 PM Title: Splashdown

Hopefully Josh can help out Julian eh? It's good to have some comic relief.



Author's Response:

Julian is awesome to write and the use of cutting or acerbic wit has certainly made him a reader favorite.

Reviewer: Bug Lover Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2016 11:35 AM Title: On the Loose

Julains a pretty cool guy so far definitely better than the one of those cattle.



Author's Response:

Absolutely 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 9:17 PM Title: Splashdown

Listed in the tags? Water sports? Becuase that wasn't in the tags, lol.

I thought Faith's mom was arriving this chapter so I kinda feel disappointed. Then again, it seems to be soon.

Many people love Julian so I don't think Faith's mom should find him. I think Faith alone should play with him to satisfy the readers. Faith's mom could have like taken anyone else.

Faith said that Henry will get a reward for staying in the box. Will that mean being given to her mom? That would be awesome.

Now I'm thinking how Faith's mom will get a tiny. Will it be finding Julian in the toilet, Josh on the floor, Henry or Carver given to her. Anything can happen.

Maybe Faith's reward to Henry is to let him free of her room and then he gets picked up her mom.

So many possibilities! I hope her appearance is next chapter(if possible).

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Faith's mom is still a couple of chapters off. Patience Tom :)

Reviewer: JDO Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 8:32 PM Title: Splashdown

Beautiful. I was kind of hoping that was gonna happen to Julien from the moment he pissed on her pillow.



Author's Response:

He did kind of start it...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 4:04 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

I hope Faith's mom is sexy similarly to Miss Harwood. Miss Harwood seemed horny all the time and I think that is probably why I liked her.

I hope she is naughty as well. Also, I hope whoever meets Faith's mom is afraid of this horny woman. Then Faith's mom enjoys the fear.

Basically Miss Harwood is a great template for Faith's mom. The difference is that Tom enjoys it. I think the tiny who meets her should be afraid.

This may be cliche but I also like it when a tiny goes "please no, not there" a few times. Also, if they swear, I find it funny.

I expect lots of dialogue, and teasing. And since the mom is more experienced, I think she should have some creative ways to tie her little guy up.

Basically, similarly to Miss Harwood. The guy just has to be scared of the sex instead of enjoying it.

Either way, I'm sure you will impress me. I just hope a tiny gets in her hands soon.

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