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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2016 8:21 AM Title: I Was Only Joshing Around

@TomSpeedy

I began doing that; but hadn't been to the site in a while and forgot (along with my previous password, I use to go by Dark Writter, now I can't retrieve that account) but your advice is well taken and I'll surely follow it.

Thanks



Author's Response:

Hey Dark Writter good to have you back! It is unfortunateyou couldn't access your account. I always appreciate your input and feedback and am glad you have found a other of my stories to your liking. I am in the process of rewriting large portions of Bang Your Head to get myself out of the corner I had written myself into.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2016 10:21 PM Title: I Was Only Joshing Around

What is with this site? It won't let me reset my password so I had to re-register.  I just wrote a long reply to your great story and when I hit submit it told me I'm not authorized and erased it all.  What the heck?

Wish you could have read what I wrote.  Anyway, love the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and review. I feel cheated I didn't get the opportunity to check out your original review but I am glad you are enjoying this one.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2016 6:04 PM Title: I Was Only Joshing Around

Man, I got so hyped for this chapter. Maybe a bit too much. Simply put. Josh got captured. By Faith. Again. Lol.

I did not expect this at all. I thought Julian would be caught first and I thought that someone else opened the drawer besides Candence and Faith.

I mean, I guess I should've known that since it is still Faith's room, only these 2 girls would be there.

You gave me all this teasing in these reviews about that I will like what is coming up, that my speculations are closer than I think and that got me thinking that maybe this chapter was it!

Then you say exactly 4 days and now I had this timer counting down. Now I gotta reset this for another 4 days. I have this feeling that it might be 8 more days until the fun arrives. Then again, you always surprise me.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

My apologies for misleading you into thinking this was to be the chapter. It is still a bit off. Like a storm brewing on the horizon and drifting ever closer. Patience. :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2016 5:43 PM Title: I Was Only Joshing Around

Julian always was a compelling character, with that attitude. But Josh has been growing toward a badass. He started out smart, and he's been quickly learning to keep his cool and think on his feet. It'll be interesting to see what kind of person he becomes now that he's face to face with them. How charming he becomes, is one possibility.

One thing that doesn't seem to have occurred to him: Faith can't kill and replace him for a month.



Author's Response:

The true crucible of mettle will be put to the test for Josh. We've seen Carver collapse under the pressure. It not that Faith can't kill him just that she can't replace him for a month if she does. We shall see...

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