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Reviewer: JDO Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2016 8:27 PM Title: One Person's Garbage...

Josh's first tactical mistake. Very very stupid to just go out in the open like that, surprising he'd do it when the smarter play was to just stay put.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2016 12:41 AM Title: One Person's Garbage...

Just keep on going. The tension is building up each chapter as the girls are getting closer in finding the guys.

Damn, Julian with these names! It's like he looked up all the synonyms for fat people. I believe in karma, and I think something large and fat will punish Julian: a giantess's ass. It's gotta be his punishment. It kinda makes sense.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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