[Report This]Date: May 21 2016 2:35 PM Title: Nowhere to Run, Nowhere to Hide
So....that mature voice was the sister, not the mom? Oh. Well, that makes my prevoius review look bad.
Faith...hmm. Interesting name choice. I never met a faith before so if I do in real life I'm going to think of this Faith.
Julian always invulnerable. I get this feeling that that will be tested heavily. He mentioned Faith's ass. Will she stick him in there? I get the feeling he will. Just squirming in there, almost dead, but somehow her survives and lives to be shoved back inside again.
How old is Faith, Julie, Faith's friend? We know their names, how about ages?
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I have tried to depict Faith as late teens no more than 19. Just because it's you and you can't tell anyone else, the more mature voice was her mom not her sister so your review was bang on. ;)
Date: May 21 2016 10:01 AM Title: Nowhere to Run, Nowhere to Hide
I see you've created a hollywood blockbuster there! I can't stop reading this story with amazement.
Especially how you manage to keep the excitement going by simply implying potential risks during Josh and Julian's flight.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving another review. Now that things are picking up the story has gotten more interesting and fun to write. With the girls in the room real vs imied danger is helping to establish a great mood especially after Ham. Please continue to enjoy and offer your thoughts about this story.