Wow Duggernaut!

2 chapters! This is amazing. You seem to have a big plan for this story since you're pumping out chapters like this.

I'm jealous of Josh, he is in like a 3d movie where you get lots of thrills and lots of scares, except he is living in this movie!

He got into close contact with both girls and my heart is beating so fast becuase one mistake and he either dies or is found.

So the dark haired girl likes Carver. I think The blonde girl likes Josh. I have no idea why she keeps saving Julian.

You mentioned a girl named Alana finding a tiny. Now you got me hooked. So it's a whole world full of giant girls and small guys. Got it. I thought it was just this blonde girl with shrunken men.

This makes me wonder. Is that mature voice from chapter 15 the blonde girl's mom? I wonder if she has her own personal tiny. (I would love to be that tiny. What if his name is Tom? Lol. I hope the mom is like Miss Harwood and this time I want her tiny to be afraid).

This double girl search party reminds me of the story "Double Dog Dare". You had 2 girls searching for multiple guys and they are clearing out hiding spots. I just keep finding references, don't I Duggernaut. :)

These 2 chapters have been the best so far. We learn about that this shrink things is not just in this room. We have another girl involved. We have a mom involved. Julian might die!

I really, really can't wait for the next chapter!