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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2016 12:20 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

@D W

Now you got me thinking.

I can see a fancy, large master bedroom with a walk in closet, and on all the shelves in that closet are shoeboxes filled with tinies, all organized by characteristics.

I bet she has some for trade, some for torture, and some for play.

Maybe she even has tinies all over her room. Stuck in her high heels, in her toilet, under the sheets, in her underwear drawers, in her bathroom drawers, in the pockets of her clothes, on her body, inside her body!

I just can't wait for a chapter about her!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2016 12:31 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

@Dw,

That's what I was thinking. I thought the offer was about Faith's mom. But it was actually about her sister. Maybe, this is just a trick and they ignore Julie's room and go straight to mom's room.

I love your ideas too. Being a servant to mom and the necklace thing was creative. I also like the present idea. It made me wonder what if Julian's offer was the Faith give her mom Julian as a gift so she will let her collect tinies again.

Faith is smart and sexy. Candence seems cute. Julie is sadistic. And mom has dominance. Loving the diversity. If I was a tiny, I'm choosing mom. There is something about her control that appeals to me. Maybe she has control of something or someone to keep her like that. :)

This mission is way too risky. I bet Julian knows what he is doing and is using this offer about Julie just to Faith lets them go. Yeah, he just wants the milf. Me too.

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2016 10:05 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

@ D W,

I remember you! Yeah, it's been while. I have seen you on this site many times. You had great reviews on that account. I'm guessing the worst part is that all your favorite stories are gone too. Well, I hope that doesn't again to you and for anyone.

And just for fun, welcome to giantess world D W. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2016 11:00 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

@ D W,

Yeah, I learned the hard way too. Now when I write long reviews, I always copy the text just in case. The site will log us off if we spend some time (like +5 min) on a review. No idea why it does that. Don't let it deter you from writing long reviews though.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2016 4:00 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

It's 4 days since the last chapter, and I'm currently at the premiere of the latest sequel of Duggernaut's epic fantasy known as Shoebox.

There is a giant crowd here waiting for the doors to open and enjoy this tale. Last chapter, we were greeted by an interesting cliffhanger.

The fans here are in a frenzy as the clock is ticking, awaiting for the doors to open for the first showing tonight!

These lucky fans here will even get to meet the man, Duggernaut himself! Yes, fans will be able to ask unlimited questions about his stories, fantasies, and future updates.

A contest released by Duggernaut stated that his biggest fan will get to be included in his stories. The winner is none other than TomSpeedy. Yes, this lucky bastard gets to watch himself in Duggernaut's giantess universe.

While we have seen some stories that featured Tom, the fan favorite "Shoebox" has yet to feature him. We don't know if he will show up later or if he won't exist in this story.

Some fan theories have predicted that Tom will accidentally wander in this house and Faith will find him right in front of Mrs. May who then punishes Faith, by taking all her tinies.

In a recent interview with super fan TomSpeedy, it may be leaked that Tom is actually in the story and that he is currently a prisoner of Faith's mom. Now, this has expanded all our predictions and this leak has got our minds racing wondering what could happen.

Stay tuned for more updates!

Author's Response:

LOL! :D Some of your speculations might be closer than you think! ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2016 5:24 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

"I'm about to shift gear now that Mom has said no new tinies. I think you might like it. :) "

I don't think I have the patience to wait 4 days for it. :) I'm so excited! I can't wait!

Author's Response:

Exactly four days...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2016 9:36 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Hmm. For the tinies getting dispersed, how about Candence decides to play with Henry and Carver. She takes them both out and Faith reminds her to watch over both of them. Candence nonchalantly says yes, but she is just staring at Carver. She sets them both on the bed and then picks up Carver. She plays with him to a point that she forgrts about Henry. Henry can't decide whether to get back in the box, stay put, or escape. He looks at Carver, being licked and played with and he decides to escape. He slides down the bed, and makes a run for the bedroom door. No one fixed the messy tunnel since Faith's mom opened the door so Henry just slips underneath and is in the hallway. Then, all of a sudden, Faith's mom shows up! (That's one idea.)

Or, maybe, there's a 5th tiny named Tom and he is actually stuck in Mrs. May's panty drawer ready to be played with. I bet that's why Mrs. May didn't demand Faith's tinies, becuase she already has one of her own. The perfect plot twist!

Or we can just go from the last chapter and Julian and Josh just follow Faith's mom out the door and they are home free (for some time) before the girls look for them. Then, as the girls go in search Josh and Julian, Fiath's sister, Julie sneaks in and takes the tinies out of the box and takes them to her room.

I hope it's option 2. :)

Author's Response:

I'm about to shift gear now that Mom has said no new tinies. I think you might like it. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2016 8:05 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

I noticed that you didn't reply to my review which made me wonder if you read it. (Not the one where I replied to Apriljoinerweb, but the one abou the chapter.)

Author's Response:

My apologies Tom, yes i read it but got sidetracked and forgot to get back to it. As always I am extremely grateful for yours and other reviews, they help provide the impetus and motivation to continue writing. For you, the mother in this story will be taller, ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2016 10:23 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

@AprilJoinerWeb,

You want Tom, the only shrunken dude in Tom's story (besides his grandpa) to break a body part?!!

That will be no fun if everyone giantess has to worry about that broken limb.

I can see it might happen in this story, but a broken toy is no toy at all in my book.

Author's Response:

Tom is in enough of a bind at the moment don't panic :)

Reviewer: JDO Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 12:22 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Josh to the rescue! It's gonna take something drastic to get rid of Julian, seems like. Hopefully the rescue attempt works and they can get somewhere safe in a hurry.



Author's Response:

Lol For now Julian is using up every last iota of luck he possesses. The real question here is there really any place safe at their size?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2016 10:28 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Hmm, a name for her. I was thinking about a short name becuase I bet I will be using her name in my reviews a lot. My preferences are the first few names, but any would be cool.

Mary, Wendy, Lisa, Debra, Lia, Carla, Rachel, (queen) Margery, Sadie, Maya, Grace, Jennifer, Julia, Julie, Kali, Karen, Kim, Lara, Maggie, Stacy.

Those are the names that I think are short and sexy to me. Other names that are not in her are becuase either I know the person in real life, or I have heard the name in some other story.

Of all those names, I hope you choose one from the first 5: Mary, Wendy, Lisa, Debra, Lia. If not you can choose the others. (Margery was just a joke.) Also, my preference is first few names to last few throughout the whole list. But honestly, they are all good.

Author's Response:

Mary

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 4:04 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

I hope Faith's mom is sexy similarly to Miss Harwood. Miss Harwood seemed horny all the time and I think that is probably why I liked her.

I hope she is naughty as well. Also, I hope whoever meets Faith's mom is afraid of this horny woman. Then Faith's mom enjoys the fear.

Basically Miss Harwood is a great template for Faith's mom. The difference is that Tom enjoys it. I think the tiny who meets her should be afraid.

This may be cliche but I also like it when a tiny goes "please no, not there" a few times. Also, if they swear, I find it funny.

I expect lots of dialogue, and teasing. And since the mom is more experienced, I think she should have some creative ways to tie her little guy up.

Basically, similarly to Miss Harwood. The guy just has to be scared of the sex instead of enjoying it.

Either way, I'm sure you will impress me. I just hope a tiny gets in her hands soon.

Reviewer: Lupe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2016 3:57 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Out of all your stories this is probably my favorite. You're doing a great job of pacing having just enough character building and action going on!

Author's Response:

Thank you for giving this story a read. I am always gratified when people enjoy the words I string together. Thank you for taking the time to review 

Reviewer: JDO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 5:11 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

God Julian is so much fun. Even in such a dire situation he's got a quip a minute. He's the best, I'm very much rooting for him even though Josh is the "good guy".

 

Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Yeah Julian seems to be the character people are rallying behind despite his caustic and acerbic personality. He is very fun to write for. :)

Reviewer: AprilJoinerWeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2016 7:34 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Have you ever done any professional writing? Your style and presentation is so captivating. Every word jumps off the page and screams epic! Don't stop writing! All your stories are fantastic

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your praise. I am delighted my stories entertain you and your sharing only makes me want to write all the more! Thanks.

Reviewer: KYo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2016 5:36 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Good story. The suspesnce is killing me! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I've been trying to update this one fairly frequently so the suspense doesn't leave you hanging too long :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2016 3:41 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

I have seen those boots before! Good choice. They are nice.

Reviewer: JDO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2016 11:48 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Dude I don't know how you do it. The consistent churning out of quality material makes my head spin. You've got the makings of a classic going on with this one, and let's be real, we're read a million of these "people abducted by girl who shrinks them" stories so for you to make one unique and also engaging speaks to how good you are. 

 

I like the characters a lot, I'm rooting for them. I was sad with what happened to Ham. I love how clever Josh is and how it's like a race, how long can Josh keep outsmarting their captor? 



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to give this one a read and then share such a flattering review. I hope I can continue to keep this story engaging and entertaining enough to keep you coming back. :)

Reviewer: Rivenscry Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2016 4:35 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Hey, I'm not minding how it's going so far, but it's a little slow for my taste. There's nothing wrong with a slow build-up, but it's kinda dragging on a bit, with barely anything happening in each chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the input. I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts it gives me insight into how the story is being received.  I'll see what I can do to pick it up in the next few chapters.

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2016 4:44 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Still quite interesting. Keep on writing :)

Author's Response:

Thanks things will start picking up soon

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