Date: April 20 2016 10:38 AM Title: Spa Time
Date: April 20 2016 8:49 AM Title: Spa Time
There are lots of grammar errors, but they don't really detract from the meaning of the story. Aside from that, the story was really good. It was very descriptive and I loved the size difference. It was written very well overall. And I loved that it was about feet since that is what I look for in stories.