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Reviewer: TheSmitty Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2016 4:19 AM Title: Prolog

Nice start. Magic never works properly in these stories!

If you want someone to help you with spelling or grammar, just ask me

 

Stay Well and Write On ~TheSmitty



Author's Response:

Thanks. I keep it in mind, though i try to do it on my own, in order to get better.

Critc and corrections are still apriciated though. ^^

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 1:09 PM Title: Prolog

interesting!
please more!



Author's Response:

There will be more. It just will take a bit of time. ^^

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 4:10 AM Title: Prolog

Danke.
Nice start. Greetings from America.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Let's hope, i can keep up, after the start. ^^

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