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Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 11 2016 12:49 PM Title: Learning One's Place

I've got one. Pick any doll. Man, woman, doesn't matter. Give it a name. Take it, along with five or so other reject dolls (strangers are good, friends are better) and slaughter them in front of the chosen one. Let their blood guts coat the chosen one when they're crushed. Make the chosen one listen to others' final moments as they're swallowed and digested alive. Chew one alive close to the chosen one and force them to listen as it screams, then force them to pick what remains out of her teeth. Then, when everything is said and done, and the chosen one is at their breaking point... force them to live. Force them to be a pet to the one who stole their happiness. Force them to scrape together what's left of their meager pointless existence to survive.

Anyone else who's really turned on right now raise your hand.

Author's Response:

At first I was going to say that was a little dark, but now that I think of it... That's not... bad. 

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